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- Writing about my little cousin's birthday 大家好, love to chat to you all! Please would you be so kind as to check my diary writing about my little cousins birthday. 谢谢你们! 上个星期六是我的表妹“Emily” 的生日。他很激动因为他今年十岁。我的阿姨请我和妈妈,海请几个表妹的朋友去他家做客。我和妈妈直到表妹喜欢音乐所以我们给表妹买了一个又可丽丽琴。 那天,我妈妈开车送我们上阿姨家。我把礼物给表妹的时候,她很高兴。她打开了大家的礼物。他得到很多东西:音乐光碟,好看的衣服,和今年最要的玩偶。打开了我们的礼物以后,她说:“非常感谢表姐!” 这是我们新西兰人的习惯。“你怎么这么知道我最喜欢的颜色是黄色?” 我们都笑了! 然后我们吃了晚饭。阿姨是出事,所以他做好吃的晚饭,还做漂亮的生日蛋糕。 在下午的时候,我表妹和几朋友去外面打球。那天我虽然玩的很开心,因为这是她第一次笑他爸爸的丧葬以来。(because it was the first time she had smiled since her dad's funeral)下星期我打算和她去看一处。我觉得他一定会很高兴。August 5, 201440
- Emailing my friend Xiao Ma about visiting her in New York 大家好, love to chat to you all! Please would you be so kind as to check my email to my friend Xiao Ma about visiting her in new york. 谢谢你们! 小马,你好! 最近好吗?你爸爸妈妈都好吗?纽约好玩吗?工作怎么样? 假期的时候,我要去纽约玩几天。因为我以前从来没去大城市。还有,我没去过美国。我听说纽约很热闹。你告诉我那里人多极了,不像小的奥克兰!到了纽约,我打算买东西(贴别试衣服!),看见时代广场和漫步中央公园。 你知道我没有很多钱。请你帮我找一个便宜旅馆。一天一百块左右就可以。还有,一个旅馆离地铁很近所以买东西很方便。 到了纽约以后,我可以去你家玩吗?请你给我打电话。我的打电话是649-4144220。谢谢你。再见! 伊莎贝拉July 16, 201420
- Writing about watching a basketball match with friends. 大家好, Sorry long time no see! 最近我很忙。做很多学习 as was coming up to my exams! love to chat to you all! Please would you be so kind as to check my email to a Chinese friend about my daily routine and weekend. Thank you so much! (^.^) 谢谢你们! 我不喜欢很多运动,可是我爱打篮球。我打得不错,但是我没有我的朋友Carly那么好。她打篮球打得可好了!Carly是我们学校篮球女队的队长。她跑得很快,比男队的队长快! (she runs so fast, faster than the captain of my schools male basketball team!) 上个月,她请我去篮球比赛因为我们都是球迷。她告诉我新西兰队跟悉尼的Kings队。我说“当然了!” 所以我们去了。那天晚上我们从学校坐公共汽车去城市。下车以后,Carly说“我希望今晚不会下雨。” 我们都没有雨伞所以几步。(neither of us had an umbrella so we walked quickly) 到了Vector Arena体育场,我们去买两张票。 那晚场上观众多极了。比赛很激烈。上半场了,两个队还没有进!我们觉得新西兰队不会赢因为他们没有那么悉尼队强。下半场,新西兰打得可好了。最后,我们新西兰队一比零赢了悉尼的Kings。我们和新西兰球迷非常高兴。 现在,我和Carly看新西兰队一定比澳大利亚队好。(now, Carly and I think the New Zealand basketball team is better than Australian team!)July 11, 201470
- Turning down an invitation by email to a friend. Please would you be so kind as to check my grammar and word structures. 很谢谢大家好! 小明,你好! 谢谢你的电子邮件。对不起,明天我忙极了,因为明天是我奶奶六十岁的生日。 所以我不能去电影院看一个电影。 我明天早上九点去商场,因为我要给奶奶买礼物:一个新茶壶。买了礼物以后,我去奶奶家里帮她彩棚。我帮奶奶买菜和做饭。我奶奶做好吃的饺子,米饭和牛肉面。我不懂谁人做饭比奶奶做饭。 后天,我很累。星期天你有空吗?我们去电影院看一个新西兰人都想看的电影好不好? 给我打电话。 谢谢! 伊莎贝拉。August 19, 201360
Exercise: Job with Enjoyment or High Salary
QUESTION:
Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
ANSWER:
It is generally believed that a satisfactory enjoyable career is vital to one’s satisfaction of life. When selecting an occupation, some people prefer the one that is lucrative, while others would rather do something that is in itself a joy to them. This essay will look into both viewpoints and help readers to analyse their merits and demerits.
It is argued by many that joy in a job should be given higher significance more important when choosing one. This is convincing because the time one spends in their career usually constitutes a significant proportion of their life time. It would be a horrible pain disappointing if the job left them unfulfilled, as the joy in a job itself is likely to lead to a happier life. Moreover, when doing something they enjoy, people tend to be more vigorous, creative and participate more actively. This results in higher competence and higher salary, therefore definitely undoubteably a better life. A good example is Mr Bill Gates, the founder of Microsoft. He gave up his opportunity to acquire more knowledge and be someone else who might have earned more, but achieved a greater success in a job he enjoyed, through which he reaped great happiness.
It is, however, also true that high wage is also crucial for a better life. This is especially true in countries, such as China, where most people work for survival rather than enjoyment and luxury. Many Chinese labours, farmers and other workers work so hard just to make enough money to feed their family members and themselves. To them, choosing a job they love is an unimaginable luxury or romantic fairy tale. In addition, some people believe that they will eventually lose interest in the job that they now are interested in, and some even do not have a job of particular interest. Therefore, earnings are a more tangible factor to consider when choosing a job.
In conclusion, it is really a dilemma as to which of the two factors is more important than the other. I suggest that, to most people, both your interest in a job and the rewarding of doing the job should be considered in a balance and thoroughly before making your that crucial decision.0 votedJuly 31, 20132- 我的事务。my daily routine! 大家好, Please would you be so kind as to check my email to a Chinese friend about my daily routine and weekend. Thank you so much! (^.^) 谢谢你们! David,你好! 谢谢你的电子邮件。对不起,最近我很忙。(sorry my email is late, I have been busy recently.) 我每天早上七点半起床。起床以后,我早上八点吃早饭。吃了早饭以后,我上学。先我妈妈开车送我到公共汽车站,然后我坐公共汽车去学校。我九点上课。我每天上午有两节课。十二点四十分我在学校吃午饭。后来,我和两个好朋友打扑克。我每天下午有一节课。下午三点十分我放学。放学以后我平时走路去图书做功课。在没有功课的时候,有时候我去商场,有时候在家里一边听音乐一边上网。晚上七点我和妈妈平时吃晚饭。吃了晚饭以后,我和妈妈看电视。晚上九点半我们睡觉,可是最近十点半我们睡觉,因为我的功课太多了。 我最喜欢的课是物理课,因为物理课真有意思。我还喜欢化学课。我都学物理课和化学课学得好。我最不喜欢的课是数学课,因为学得很难。学数学课没有物理课那么简单。 在周末,我平时先做我的功课,然后有时间玩儿。最近,我很喜欢上网。有时候我和朋友去电影院看电影。有时候妈妈,小狗和我去公园跑步。下星期六是我朋友的生日,所以我去她家里。下星期天妈妈和我想去"Food Show"吃好吃的东西。 告诉我你事务吧!最近你忙不忙? 在周末,你喜欢做什么? 谢谢! 伊莎贝拉。July 28, 201392
- 我的周末。 大家好, This is a diary entry about buying my mum a birthday present. Please would you be kind enough as to check my chinese word order structure grammar etc. 谢谢你们! 星期五放学以后, 我从学校坐公共汽车去了商场(shopping mall),因为明天是我的妈妈生日,所以我想给妈妈买礼物。商场离学校很近,可是天气不好,所以我上了公共汽车。公共汽车人多极了!有的人听音乐,有的人做功课,还有的人看书。我下午四点下车。到商场以后,我先买了热咖啡,然后我喝了咖啡和瞅了商店。在商场楼上是我妈妈和我最喜欢的服装店,所以我走路去那里。我去服装店里面以前,我看了一件漂亮的毛衣。里面去以后,我问售货员:"那件毛衣在那边?" 售货员说:"啊,在那边。" 我马上来到那边。一件毛衣颜色好看,因为是粉红色的。妈妈穿一定合适!买了毛衣以后,我走路去车站。后来,我晚上六点回家。第二天,我给妈妈礼物的时候,他很高兴,她告诉我:"我爱这件毛衣!"我很高兴。July 26, 201370
