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Hi,glad to meet you.This is littlebear from Beijing.I'm preparing for IELTS.I will take the test at the end of this year. I hope to find a friend in italk to help me practice oral English and correct writing's mistakes.
As an exchange,you can talk anything with me and ask any questions about Beijing which you are intersted.If you will take a HSK,I also can help you correct mistakes and give a native speaker's suggestion.
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- Sunny day is unnormal in Beijing It was rainning from yesterday afternoon.A autumn rain rushed off dirty air and haze.At the same time,it cooled down air temperature to below zero.That is why we can see blue sky and white cloudy today. Air pollution makes Beijing becoming very famous in rencent year.One study of air pollution about Beijing said PM 2.5 was over the standard line in two-thirds time of a year.How terrible data it is.You can imagine that we breath a varity of polltant into lung broking down our body.Diseases of respiratory system gradually become a commen disease from kids to the aged.Nine times out of ten people around me has respiratory system diseases. It is auspicious that goverment begin to take measures to prevent air deteriorating even further, such as vehicle restriction, removing severse pollution enterprises and factories to subsurb.Moreover,they promise that they can control pollution in future five to ten years and PM2.5 will be back to standard line.October 28, 201600
我没有看你给的英文原文,从中文水平来讲,这篇翻译已经很好了,意思能表达明白。但是有几个地方读起来不容易理解。我仅针对你汉语的表达和通顺度、理解度进行了修改,希望对你有帮助。
植物能做智慧的决定
植物比我们以前认为的更聪明。根据研究表明,它们能够做关于风险的决定。科学家们发现了植物之一豌豆虽然没有大脑但是还能够做关于生存的决定。英国牛津大学和以色列Tel-Hai大学的研究者们种植了几棵豌豆植物,植物的根分裂在两个花盆中。一个花盆总是有等量的营养物,另一个花盆的营养物水平波动变化大。植物的根一致地转到了有更多营养物的花盆。
该研究论文在这个星期中的《当前生物》杂志中出版。研究者Alex Kacelnik说这个实验“提出一个问题,不仅仅是关于植物,也是关于动物和人类。”他在思考是否豌豆用有限的决定能力是不是比人类的决定更有效。(他在思考,豌豆有限的决定力是否比人类的更有效)他说:“我们有一个很复杂的大脑,但是大部分的时间可能不在用(没用)。”Kacelnik教授说他不认为植物的聪明(智慧)和人类类似,但是它们这种复杂的行为有效地利用了大自然的机会。如果人类采用这种策略,我们的生命就可能不一样。
Plants Can Make Intelligent Decisions
Plants are a lot smarter than we thought. According to researchers, they are capable of making intelligent decisions regarding risk. Scientists have discovered that one plant, the humble pea, can make decisions regarding how to survive best, even though it does not have a brain. Researchers from the UK's Oxford University and Israel's Tel-Hai College grew several pea plants that had their roots separated between two pots. Each pot contained differing amounts of nutrients. One pot always had the same amount, while the other pot varied between a lot and a little. The plants turned out to be remarkably consistent at diverting their roots to the pot with the most nutrients.
The research paper will be published this week in the 'Current Biology' journal. Researcher Alex Kacelnik said the experiment, "raises a question, not about plants, but about animals and humans". He wondered whether the pea plant might be more efficient in using its limited decision-making resources than humans. He said: "We have a very fancy brain, but maybe most of the time we're not using it." Professor Kacelnik said he did not think that pea plants were intelligent in the human sense, but that they exhibited complex behaviours to efficiently take advantage of natural opportunities. It would be interesting to see how our lives would be different if we adopted similar strategies.0 votedJuly 8, 20160- Is there anyone can help me to correct ielts articles pls I don't know whether my expression is correct, whether there are more native ways to express them as well as the punctuation.Article is as follow, title:Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? I agree that university accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.Ideally, women have chances to study at schools equally as men.But in practice, and the proportion of women’s enrollment is far less than that of male’s from elementary education to higher education. Individuals tend to leave girls at home in some place. Cuz they believe that girls will be someone’s wife in the future.It does not deserve for girls’ education at all. For instance, in a poor family even if the girl's performance at school is better than her brother’s, the learning opportunity in the university will give her brother. Namely, a girl with a high degree of education is not useful for their family in many countries. There is normally little chance of female education when they were young. The gap between girls and boys will be increased gradually, and then fewer opportunities for girls accept higher education.It is a vicious circle.If university enrollment can correct the imbalance, it will not only be beneficial but also essential change for education.If girls have more chances to enter into universities, there will be more highly educated women to participate in social work.It will also prove that women who obtain qualifications have the same value as men. As a consequence, girls have had less opportunity in junior education, we should change the present situation.What is needed, therefore, is equal numbers of female and male in every subject of university. (238 words)July 5, 201641

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