is that correct?

To: Ricardo Gonzales [email protected]
From: Nikita Lunev [email protected]
Subject: Key ideas for the development of your company
Dear sir,

You may remember that I attended the brainstorming session previously. I’m very interested in developing the our company. and below are I can name some of the key ideas that were discussed at thatis session.

First of all, we could should introduce something novelnew elements in theour product.: Ffor example, to inventing new tastes or to make the design of its packageing that is more modern and innovative. Moreover, as we need to stand out from compete with competitors carrying similar products, so, we could set lower prices and come up with make “eyes catching” advertisements. Finally, one of the best ways to increase brand awareness and attract the customers is to become a sponsor of the Olympic Games. This would be very It can helpful to propel our the company into to enter the international scene.

I will be very happy glade if you my ideas can are considered my ideas.

Yours faithfully,
Nikita
Nikita Lunev
Marketing Manager
Email: [email protected]

Nice email! I hope I have understood your email correctly that you are pitching to another company about your ideas? :) It might be expensive to be a sponsor of the Olympics though! 

Working at night is really hard

Now I’m talking to with may mate Patri, we are talking about paranormal activities (such as the film “Paranormal Activity”). We have decided to write this compositition to for relaxing us ;-) 

Patri is tellsing me that when she was a child, and she slept in her grandmother’s house, and heard she listened stranger noisesvoices. 

One day, she was curious wanted to find out where the voices noises came from, so she woke up awake in the middle of the night but she didn’t manage to find get anything.
Then the her grandmother went to her room and she explained to her that the noises came from it was the opened window. The because that night there was a horrible weather was horrible that night and the noises voices were produced by the animals outside the house.
Hearding that, my mat I concluded that the next: nothing is as what it seems. And another thing,: my mate isn’t normal ;-)
Thanks for helping me with this writing.
Best regards.

Like/is like

Jane behaves like a seven-year-old girl of 7 even though although she had turned 11 last week. Marie, on the other handcontrary, is more mature and behaves like an elder siblinggirl.

Is it correct?Does it sound natural?

I think it sounds fine! :) 

MY DEAR DIARY

Today'sIt's 2013.11.13. Today I woke get up at 6:00. I think it's so late (As in you think you woke up late?). I don't study English and i feel tired tried.I hope to have someone a people help me with my English. Sad.

有志者 事竟成！好好加油吧！:)

The My First Day in School
This is my first day in studying with this language school. I had a test in the morning. In the afternoon, Jade who is the manager of China and Taiwan(China) branches of the school introduced the information about this school to me and another Taiwanese girl. After that, R.J introduced the courses offered by the of this school for all new students beginning class this week. Then R.J took us on a tour looking around the area of the school campus, especially the currency exchange site. After that, then we went back to school to pay our school the fees about our study. At the endlast, the school had a welcoming party for all the new students.

The test was very interesting. At the listening part, we was were showned a one picture once and was listened to four sentences, before choosing then we must chose the closest sentence matching for the picture. For example: The woman was typing on the computer. At the reading part, we only had just to do some multiple-choice questions. At the writing part, we must write a paragraph wrote a issue about a picture. In that picture, there was were a woman and a man smiling in front of before a flower store, they were smiled. Before the welcoming party, I got my the results for the about my test, it's was 4 out of 10. My level is was HIGH BEGINNER. My writing score is much very lowerd, just 2 out of 10. I think it was because I had too many spelling mistakes, and I did not tell have a good story about that picture.

In At the welcoming party, all the new students first introduced themselves first. ThenNext, we played a game called Bingo. First, everyone would have got a color paper card and a white paper card which had have three rows and three columns., Yyou will write should wrote down you name on theat color paper card and in the centre square grid of the white paper card. After that, you will should introduce yourself to other eight persons, and asked for their names, and let them write wrote down their name in the others grids of the white paper. Next, the host will collect collected all the color paper and put them in a box, before and drawing out the extracted one color paper one by one. You can marked the name that is written on the paper that the host has drawn, on extracted in your white paper. If the names on of your white paper forms was in a straight line, you will should called 'Bingo', and you can get a prize for of free beers provided by the Q-bay, which is the bar oin the first floor of theis building. I didn't win the prize, but it was very interesting, and exciting game, because you must first introduce yourself to other strangers, and ask theym for their a help. 

It was a very good first day! I do hope that tomorrow the classes tomorrow will be interesting!

Describe a film I have seen

I am going to take the IELTS test next week. Hereunder is my speaking piece on the topic: Describe a film I have seen.

Could you give me comments in term of: vocabulary, grammar and coherence? Thank you for your help!!!

Today I’d like to talk to you about Harry Porter Potter which is one of my favourite films movie series. These It was movies depict a fiction film telling a story about the lives of people in the wizarding world. The central character is was Harry Porter Potter, who is used to be an orphan in the normal Muggle world before discovering that he was is a wizard. Afterwards that, he went to a special school called Howard Hogwarts where he learnt the taught him necessary magical skills to succeed in wizarding world. He also had to deal with challenges in terms of studyies, friendship, love and even the fighting against the dark power.

I saw watched the first movie episode of this series film when I was at high school, at about grade 11. The As the entire series film hadve 7 moviesparts, with and the last part was introduced just 2 years ago., I was always looking forward to the release of a new moviecatching the lastest episodes of it.

My decision Why I decided to see watch the film was  might be because at that time, due to my frend's strong recommendation of the Harry Porter Potter movies was recommended as a masterpiece, making me feel curious about it. Moreover, I had also read the original novels before, and I was really captivated by the storyline. This is one of the books that I cannot bear to really can’t put it down, and I have reading it numerous times from cover to cover. Hence, my curiosity was piped. So I guess the film would be as attractive as the book. 

I think the most important reason why I enjoyed the movies greatly this film and I think it was largely because that it they made me felt feel adventurous. It was is really a fantastic moviefilm and you should watch it too if you haven't.

Good luck for your IELTS! :)