This is my cause or and effect essay. Please help me to correct errors : )

Since a long time ago, alcoholism has been a the problems till today. Yet, many people aren't being actually doesn’t concerned enough about it carefully. How many times have you heard about the effects of alcoholism? Have you ever  taken them seriously into account? Alcoholism is a really serious and dangerous problems that everyone faces today. Many people are used to drinking alcohol, potentially exposing them to and it means they are exposed to alcohol abuse.; they have the possibilities to become the alcoholics, and that is the This can be a problem. So, I am writeing this essay to show demonstrate you about the physical, psychological, and economic effects of alcoholism and warn indicate you about how hazardous they those are. 

Firstly, the effects of alcoholism can bring about bad health consequences to you in physical ways. These health consequences can be are very serious, as because it can easily lead to these can be the main causes of your death. For example, alcoholsic can cause the development of cancer in human’s organs like the kidney and liver. Besides that, alcohol also reduces the amount ability of digestiveng nutrients, leading to shorter lifespans. which make people live long and healthy. Alcoholism can also cause gives acute damage in the neurons, resulting in low so it makes the metabolism slow, reduced lowers appetite, and potentially causinges depression (This will be mentioned later, do you want to remove it from here?). Other impacts on one's health includes There are other effects like liver cirrhosis of the liver. HenceSo, if you drinking alcohol too much alcohol, it’ll can cause severe damage to your health severely, and in the end, it can kill you.

In conclusion, the effects of alcoholism which are physical, psychological, and economic can cause many problems that affect your life in all aspects. Alcohol damages to your brain, muscles, digestion process, and other disorders that affect your health

In conclusion, the effects of alcoholism can be felt in the which are physical, psychological, and economic aspects, leading to both short and long term problems, can cause many problems that affect severly affecting the quality of your life in all aspects. Alcohol damages to your brain, muscles, digestion process, and other disorders that affect your health. (Had been mentioned previously) Why allow alcohol to take over your life?

Hello! Nice effort on the essay. :) Those highlighted in orange are the corrections while green are the suggestions.

Just some opinions on the essay,
1. It is not that everyone who drinks alcohol will suffer the impacts mentioned above. I think more specifically, you are referring to over-drinking, or binge drinking. There are people who do drink red wine in moderation for better health.
2. Not everyone who binge drinks will suffer the mentioned effects as well. Hence, using words like 'could' or 'may' might be better than using 'will'.
3. Typically for conclusion, it would be nice to summarize the main ideas that you have brought up in the essay.
*Oh and just a note, alcohol can even be cheaper than water in Europe :P

Secondly, Tthe second effects caused by alcoholism are psychological. At first, you would think that alcohol may makes you feel relaxed, but if when you drink it in excess, it increases anxiety and causes depression. And if it gets worse, it can cause make people to resort to choose the extreme measures to resolve them (What are you referring to, the initial problems or the depression?). Under the influence of alcohol, people can behave and react differently as well, and some would resort to violence when drunk. Also, we can see that many good person turns into absolutely different character when he or she drinks alcohol too much. It can be appear to us, and also it can make you commit illegal problems like violence or drunk driving, because alcohol can change your behaviors in a wrong way. Alcohol is very powerful and can alter all your normal behaviors into bad dangerous ones.

Lastly, there are economic impacts The third effects of alcoholism are economic. Alcohol is not cheap. Binge drinking can If you drink almost every time, it costs a lot of money. Moreover, if you become addicted or catch get a fatal disease because of the due to alcohol, the cost of treatment would be expensive and then you have to go the hospital or mental clinic to cure them. As a result, the medical hospital bills will may drive you into bankruptcy.