Please help me correct my essay!!! I would like to go to China because of several reasons. First, as we have seen in the last decades that are demand is closely related to level of economic developing of the country, as economy growth momentum of China becomes more and more powerful, the Chinese art market experienced and outstanding increase of demand, I’m very optimistic that this trend will continue well into the future. What’s more, China was an undeveloped country in last few decades, the biggest problem people were facing to solve that was poverty, therefore, government focused on developing the industry which need people having science knowledge and technology, thus, only science courses were important in the schools. However, in the nowadays, the materials life are abundant for most of Chinese, people start to pursue spiritual life. Students are more freely to study what they are actually interested in, as a result, the demand of culture and art are rising as well as the artist and art works. Under influence of globalization, China are more acceptably and openly to other countries’ culture which reflet in the various areas, there is no wonder if you see many foreign brands are more than local ones in the shopping malls. Regarding of art, as the communications between foreign countries and China are increasing, the events and fairs are getting more and more, the foreign artist are becoming welcomed and popular here. Moreover, through my experience in 2012 Affordable Art Beijing, we collected art works from artist and exhibited in China, we got thousands applications whom were not only Chinese, because of the space limited, only hundreds were exhibited, just in short three days, most of them were sold and most of buyers are Chinese which means the art appreciation and affordability are increasing. If I have been granted an all-expense-paid trip and funding for and artistic project in China, I would bring more variety forms of art and culture to there. I bet the benefits are vast in many areas, such as broaden the local people horizon and inspiring the local artists which may help them develop the local art industry better. If the project goes well and sustainable, it also could bring economic benefits to the local people.