Thank you all for your reply. I probably left out some important details. I have been studying chinese for over a Year, and I probably know how to hand write between 1000-2000 characters, but I spend most of my time praticing writing when learning chinese, and even then, it is sooo easy for me to forget how to write it if I take like a couple of weeks off. I probably spend 30percent of my time writing, 20 percent reading, 30 percent listening, and 20 percent speaking, but this writing is ripping me apart... especially since it is Traditional characters taht I am learning.

Exercise: Complaint Letter to Fly-by Night Travel

TASK DESCRIPTION:

You booked a two-week holiday to Sydney with Fly-by Night Travel. You are (were) not happy with the (your) holiday (vacation arranged by Fly-by night travel) – the flight was delayed, the hotel was noisy and so on.

"who'? Write to Fly-by-Night Travel to complain about (your) the holiday giving details about the problems. Request some compensation or refund.

MY LETTER:

Dear Manager,

I am writing to complain about a travel (vacation I went on) organised by your company last month. I hope that you can (will take my concerns in to consideration) consider my concerns seriously. "more polite"

First(ly), your company (I was )promised to me that you (your company) would (set me up with( hire a top (an elite) airline company that would to provide a flight for the (my) journey. But the fact was The flight that sent us abroad was (over an hour) late for more than an hour. All (many of) the tourists were left at a waiting place (in the lobby) with no sufficient (without) seats to have a rest and no explanation of the (on going) situation though we demanded it.

Worse still, the quality of the accommodation was (miserable) poor. I do not believe that this (It is hard to believe that this) five-star hotel – as your company claimed it to be – could provide such a room. Its sound-proof facility did not work well (It was nowhere near sound proof)and the noises coming from other rooms at night kept me awake.

Still more, your guide brought us to a shop that sold items at unreasonably high prices. I suspect the guide has (had) a connection with the owner and was trying to defraud Rip us off us.

Therefore, I really regret paying so much for your service, and I request (Hope you may consider) a partial refund for this (our trouble). Thank you.

Expecting your reply,
Melaminefree Wang

"This letter sounds a little rude, so I softened it up a little bit.... but with your original letter, if it were me, I would not consider a refund"

not sure what your result will be, but almost all of my chinese friends who left china didnt regret it.

My friend Jinfei

I have a girl friend who called Named Jinfei. She is my best friend.
she is my we are classmates in at our University,and we have lived together for four years. we had lived in a same dormitary.she loves dancing, drawing, and she has a lot of is also very artistic. Because she likes things of art,so she had studied art in Qinghua University art acedamy for three years after university graduate. 美國人講英文的時候 我們先說我們的結局再說我們的道理. 比方說: "She studied art at Qinghua university for three years after graduating, because she loves art." 所以在前面

As the sake of her boyfriend is not work at Beijing,so she determined to abandon her work for her boy friend.
She had leaved Beijing last week and Now she is living in ShenZhen.
ShenZhen is very far from Beijing,so,I'm a little gloomy for her leaving off.