hey please correction this conversation
S: Nǐ hǎo,Herma
H: Nǐ hǎo,Savira
S: Nǐ hǎo ma?
H: Wǒ bù tài hǎo
S: Wèishéme?
H: Wǒ dé le gǎnmào , tóu yě téng
S: Nǐ yào bù yào qù yīyuàn?
H: Wǒ bùyòng qù yīyuàn
S: Nǐ yào chī dianr yào, hái yào chī zhōngyào
H: Hǎo ba
S: Wǒ hěn kùnhuò
H: Wèishéme?
S: Wǒ dìdì (
dìdi)hé wǒ māmā(
māma) dōu huí
lái yǎjiādá, kěshì wǒ de sùshè(sùshè???) tài xiǎo
H: Nǐ xiǎng zū fángzi?
S: Shì a, wǒ xiǎng zū yī jiàn (
yì jiān)yǒu chúfáng
、 hé cèsuǒ hé kètīng de fángzi
H: Hǎo a. Xīngqírì(
xīng qī rì) wǒ gēn nǐ yīqǐ(
yì qǐ) qù zūfáng gōngsī, Hǎo mǎ?
S: Tài hǎole
N: Nǐ hǎo Savira,Herma. Duìbùqǐ wǒ lái wǎnle
S: Nǐ hǎo Nida
H: Nǐ hǎo Nida. Nǐ zěnme le?
N: Wǒ xīnqíng hěn bù hǎo
H: Shénme shìr?
N: Wǒ gēn nán péngyǒu fēnshǒule
H: A~zhēn yíhàn, nǐ bié nánguò
S: Shì, zhǎo bié de nán péngyǒu ba
N: Wǒ xiǎng zhǎo yīgè (yí gè)yīngjùn kě'ài de nán péngyǒu, kěshì wǒ bùnéng wàngjì tā
S: A, nín yīnggāi jìxù qiánjìn
N: Hǎo ba. Wǒ huì chángshì, xièxiè
These sentences are very well . just the "yi" need to Change tone .