Do you like rain days?
Do you like rainny days?

Recent rains often.
Recently, it rains often.

Suddenly under the heavy rain in the noon of a few days ago.
It suddenly rained in the afternoon a few days ago.
Cream dripping wet in the way of cycling.
and I got drenched(湿透) while cycling

The rain always with depression.
Rain always bring about feelings of melancholy.
The weather outside is dark mood also low.
My feelings go down along with the weather 

So I don't like rain days.

Therefore, I don't like rainy days.

大家喜歡下雨天嗎?

最近常常下雨
前幾天中午突然下起一場大雨
在騎車的路上被淋的溼答答。

下雨天總是帶著一點憂鬱
每當外面的天氣陰暗心情也會跟著低落
所以我不喜歡下雨天。

<Please help me correct, thank you. :)>

I love my city

Hi, everyone! Welcome to Shenzhen!
Shenzhen is the place where I was born and where I had have lived until now. There are my parents, my relatives and my friends are here. I love Shenzhen.
　Shenzhen is a metropolis. There are lots of skyscrapers. Shenzhen is also a city full of flowers. You can see green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere. There are many hills and mountains. You can also hear streams singing. There is also a long coastline in Shenzhen. You can enjoy all kinds of seafood and the feeling of water washes washing over you. That’s really wonderful!
　Shenzhen is not only a beautiful place, but also an energetic place. It once held the Universiade . People here are friendly too. Whenever you need help, someone will always be willing to give you helping help. In this city you can （或 will)  see smiling faces and hear laughter (没有 s) everywhere, People here are energetic and full of passion for the life. (或 passionate of life)
　This is my city, I love my city.

画面 好美啊

Tomb-sweeping Day

Today is Tomb-sweeping day of （in） China, (and) Many people have different approaches to commemorate them pay respect to their ancestors.
In usually, it rains from the day of the (当天）festival and last(s) (for) about 2 or 3 days. but today is a sun(ny) day, and) the temperature （is）above 20 degrees.in your eyes views are all golden yellow rape flowers, I and my brothers and sisters（，） total 11 persons（，） go (went) for a walk.
We took many more photos with different phones. when (While) we were taking photos, there are 2 young girls besides of us about 30 meters (away), they were taking photos and posing. My nephew who is 6 years old, take (took) his mother's phone and approached to the girls: I wonder take photos for pretty girls! the young girls watch for looked at the little boy, smile(d) and shy(ly, (and)they left quickly !

hello!

Hi, my name is Riya，17 years old this year (I am 17 years old this year. 
I am now are learning English, I engaged in a salon work (hairdressing),
I hope to get to know some of my friends (to learn together.)

Be Yourself

In every school a "top" crowd (the elite/the social elite/the trendsetters) set the pace;while the others follow they (their) lead. Let's say the top crowd decide that it (is) smart to wear bright red sweaters. Pretty soon(,) everybody is wear(ing) bright red sweater(s). There is nothing wrong with that, except the fact(多余） that in (for) some people a bright red sweater is extremely unsuitable unbecoming（不明白原来的意思.是不是“不像话"? . The situation can even become dangerous, if the top crowd decide that it is smart to drink and to driven cars at 70 miles an hour. Then (In this case,) the people who follow the leader are (now/actually) endangering their lives.
Now,changes （chances） are that you have (came) accross this a situation like this more than once in your life; chances are that one time or another you probably did something you knew to be (/that is) wrong. You may have excuse(d) yourself by saying, "Gee, the crowd does it." Well, let the crowd do it, but you yourself should not don't do it yourself. Learn to say "no".
Remember this in your heart, you are unique, just be yourself.

that in some (for) people a bright red sweater is extremely unsuitable unbecoming（不明白原来的意思.是不是“不像话"?）

Unbecoming 除了 "不像话"，也带有 "成何体统" 的意思。

不可以用来表达“荒谬”

except that some people look ridiculous wearing bright red sweaters.

Ching Ming Festaval

Today is Ching Ming Festival (清明节）, or Tomb-Sweeping Festival, one of the 24 solar terms (二十四节气之一）. It comes on April 4th or 5th, 108 days after the Winter Solstic, which is the 22nd solar term. It is a traditional fesitval to honor the dead in China. On this day(,) people go to their ancestors' graves to express our (their) mourning for the dead. It is (/has been) designated as a national holiday since 2008.

Ching Ming means pure, clear and bright literally.

Ching Ming means pure, clear and bright, literally. / Ching Ming literally means pure, clear and bright.

Spring comes and winter disappears. It becomes warmer and warmer, tree sprouting and flowers blooming. So it is also a perfect day for touring. (/Therefore, it is a perfect day for touring/ It is therefore a perfect day for touring.) What a pleasure (it is) to have light and bright clothes on and hike or picnic with several friends in somewhere surrounded by a sea of flowers and green vegetations.
But unfortunately, it is gloomy today (but 好像有点多余)(and) the sun didn't (even) show his face even. I would rather stay at home all day than squeeze (into/with) the crowd in the underground. The expressway is free of charge 3 (three) todays days from today on (/onwards). You can imagine the heavy traffic on the road and the squeezed crowds in those spots of interest which (/like) I experienced last National Day. I swear I will never (again) travel out on such a national holiday.

写的好棒啊。。。

老师教过我，尽量别把阿拉伯数字参进作文除非是日期，因为不好看。