Tomb-sweeping Day
Today is Tomb-sweeping day of China, Many people have different approaches to commemorate them ancestors.
In usually, it rains from festival and last about 2 or 3 days. but today is a sun day, the temperature above 20 degrees.in your eyes views are all golden yellow rape flowers, I and my brothers and sisters total 11 persons go for a walk.
We took many more photos with different phones, when we were taking photos, there are 2 young girls besides of us about 30 meters, they were taking photos and posing.My nephew who is 6 years old, take his mother's phone and approach to the girls: I wonder take photos for pretty girls! the young girls watch for the little boy, smile and shy,they left quickly !
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Tomb-sweeping Day
Today is Tomb-sweeping day of （in） China, (and) Many people have different approaches to commemorate them pay respect to their ancestors.
In usually, it rains from the day of the (当天）festival and last(s) (for) about 2 or 3 days. but today is a sun(ny) day, and) the temperature （is）above 20 degrees.in your eyes views are all golden yellow rape flowers, I and my brothers and sisters（，） total 11 persons（，） go (went) for a walk.
We took many more photos with different phones. when (While) we were taking photos, there are 2 young girls besides of us about 30 meters (away), they were taking photos and posing. My nephew who is 6 years old, take (took) his mother's phone and approached to the girls: I wonder take photos for pretty girls! the young girls watch for looked at the little boy, smile(d) and shy(ly, (and)they left quickly !
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