I love my city

Hi, everyone! Welcome to Shenzhen!
Shenzhen is the place where I was born and where I had have lived until now. There are my parents, my relatives and my friends are here. I love Shenzhen.
　Shenzhen is a metropolis. There are lots of skyscrapers. Shenzhen is also a city full of flowers. You can see green trees and beautiful flowers everywhere. There are many hills and mountains. You can also hear streams singing. There is also a long coastline in Shenzhen. You can enjoy all kinds of seafood and the feeling of water washes washing over you. That’s really wonderful!
　Shenzhen is not only a beautiful place, but also an energetic place. It once held the Universiade . People here are friendly too. Whenever you need help, someone will always be willing to give you helping help. In this city you can （或 will)  see smiling faces and hear laughter (没有 s) everywhere, People here are energetic and full of passion for the life. (或 passionate of life)
　This is my city, I love my city.

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