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I think that family is more important now that it was in the past.
I think this is because kids today need more support than ever before.
A child has more bad difficult choices nowadays. For example, in the past, the child or teenager had only two choises: to help his parents, to get a food and survive, or to die from hunger and loneliness.

(bad choice = to make a bad decision, like to start smoking... etc.

difficult choice = a decision that is difficult to make

food doesn't need 'a', it is an uncountable noun)

Now the child usually doesn’t need a food and warm clothes, because parents provide for him. And teenagers can start taking drugs, an alcohol, to contact with a bad company. That’s why the child needs loving families to guide them it and more support every day.

(you could say the 'childern need loving families to guide them'

or 'the child needs a loving family to guide it/him/her')

I also believe this because children need a financial support from their parents.
For example, in the past, the child had got an opportunity to survive by means of natural resources, but now it is almost impossible. That’s why children need family as well, it is necessary to have even a little financial support.
This is why I feel that family is more important now than in the past.

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