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Monday and a hellish morning on the bus
Have u ever tried to push urself into an overloaded bus in during the morning rush hours? Well, I have. I have been reshaped by the crowd on such a bus every morning of during the weekdays. I never believed knew how flexible the human body could be like this before until i started commuting by bus. (I never believed the human body could be so flexible until....I never knew the human body could be so flexible before I started...) Actually, now I don't even know why people spend so much money in gyms to keep fit, all they need is to simply ride a bus in the morning. U'll have to use every piece of ur mucsles You have to use every muscle to get urself enough space for breathing, standing and to avoid tumbling when the bus changes its speed or turns.
Usually it's quite an exercise and makes u feel like a fighter. But things can be much worse on monday mornings. Just like this morning. ...monday mornings, just like this one. When the bus arrived this morning, it was not overloaded anymore. It was , but overfilled! (what is your meaning here? Overloaded=overfilled, I fixed the grammar, but the meaning is still strange.... "not overloaded, but overfilled" doesn't make sense.....maybe you may want to say "it was overloaded more than usual") It was ridiculous that a bus could contain so many people and still move, and I even thought it was going to explode the next second. ("...at any second" is better)
I would love to step back and wait for the next bus if i could. (Tense problem, as it stands it is present tense, to change it to past use "would have loved to....if I could have") But i was standing right between the open door and a dozen people trying to get on the bus recklessly. Thus I was forced forewards and magically got inside the door with only half of my left foot on the 2nd step only, and the worst was yet to come——the door closed. I felt like it squeezed the last breath out of my chest and i had to turn my head as hard as possible trying not to bury my face into the butt of someone standing on the upper stair.LOL! And the girl behind me was pushing my waist, probably to get herself some air. Standing on my tiptoes, wrenching my neck, every minutes on the bus was a real torture. I suffered for over 40 minutes till I finally got the chance to get off the bus, totally exhausted with my legs cramping, I had and used up all the my energy for the whole day. The only comfort was that I should be very lucky for the following days as a compensation for this nightmare on this hellish morning bus. Very well written....and funny!0 votedApril 21, 20132Happy Lantern Festival
Today is the Happy Lantern Festival. In the evening they hang out thousands of colorful lanterns for people to enjoy and we usually eat sweet dumplings named called glutinous rice balls. They are made of various kinds of fillings. For example, red bean, black sesame and fruits are a few. Black sesame is my favorite filling. There are also activities like the dragon dance, lion dance and setting off fireworks - it's very lively （BTW, I will go to watch fireworks display in the evening）
Now, I am going to say "Happy Lantern Festival " to my friends.
Wish all friends can enjoy a wonderful night !O(∩_∩)O~0 votedMarch 28, 20130- 生活的目的 生活的目的 我们生活的目的是什么不是最重要的问题吗？不管你是谁，是哪国人，是有什么工作的，这个问题一定在你的心理发生过了，同意吗？我在忖以下，多少人觉得他们已经找到了这个问题的答案？此外，如果他们的情况是这样的，已经找到了，我还忖，在他们心里他们真的满意，真的相信他们找到的答案，还是他们的大脑跟心不在一起？有的人说，如果它们两件在你生活上的事情是互相同意的，就会让你发现真的安全是什么。可是，我还对我自己问，如果你生活意思的问题的答案是假的，不是真的，你的安全也是假的吗？这两件事情，你的答案是真的还是不真的，跟你的安全是不是真的，这两件事情有关系没有关系？那，如果是这样的，什么问题是最重要的，你满意不满意你的想法，能不能接受你的答案，还是你的答案是真的还是假的？你们觉得呢March 24, 2013170
HEALTH BEAUTY
Today I went to take art photos with my friends. (...and had some art photos taken with my friends.) Thanks for (to) the art photos , they give us a chance for getting together and having funs (we were able to get together and have some fun). However , I wasn't quite satisefied (satisfied) with my photos today . My arms was (were) a little fat and my face looks more bigger. At first I prefered (wanted) to blame the dresser but now I thought (think) it wa(s)n't all her faults.For many young girls , their weight grows up with ages ever since being an andult. (For many young girls, starting from the time they become adults, they begin to become heavier with age)...or... (....they begin to gain weight as they get older) I think the biggest reason is that they the lack of exercise (or....that they lack exercise...don't use "of" to connect a verb with it's object, except when using a verb as a measure word....such as "a drink of water". So, the same to me (It is the same with me). In the woking days , I sit with a chair than more 8 hours long every day and never do some sports . During the days I work, I sit in a chair for 8 hours every day and hardly ever exercise. So , comes the (the result is a) fat(,) or...(and) unhealthy body.Exercise make(s) prople being fit (people fit) and more healthy. (you can also say....."exercise makes people fitter and healthier") If we want to be a beauty , don't alway relay on the cosmetics , try to take some exercise as much as you can! There are two ways you can say this...."If we want to be a beauty, we must not always rely on cosmetics, we should rather try to exercise as much as we can." The other way is "If you want to be a beauty, don't always rely on (or you can't always rely) cosmetics, but try to exercise as much as you can (or "you would better to exercise as much as you can"). 不错！你的意思是清楚的，就是语法有几个问题啊。
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