HEALTH BEAUTY

Today I went to take art photos with my friends. (...and had some art photos taken with my friends.) Thanks for (to) the art photos , they give us a chance for getting together and having funs (we were able to get together and have some fun). However , I wasn't quite satisefied (satisfied) with my photos today . My arms was (were) a little fat and my face looks more bigger. At first I prefered (wanted) to blame the dresser but now I thought (think) it wa(s)n't all her faults.For many young girls , their weight grows up with ages ever since being an andult. (For many young girls, starting from the time they become adults, they begin to become heavier with age)...or... (....they begin to gain weight as they get older) I think the biggest reason is that they the lack of exercise (or....that they lack exercise...don't use "of" to connect a verb with it's object, except when using a verb as a measure word....such as "a drink of water". So, the same to me (It is the same with me). In the woking days , I sit with a chair than more 8 hours long every day and never do some sports . During the days I work, I sit in a chair for 8 hours every day and hardly ever exercise. So , comes the (the result is a) fat(,) or...(and) unhealthy body.Exercise make(s) prople being fit (people fit) and more healthy. (you can also say....."exercise makes people fitter and healthier") If we want to be a beauty , don't alway relay on the cosmetics , try to take some exercise as much as you can! There are two ways you can say this...."If we want to be a beauty, we must not always rely on cosmetics, we should rather try to exercise as much as we can." The other way is "If you want to be a beauty, don't always rely on (or you can't always rely) cosmetics, but try to exercise as much as you can (or "you would better to exercise as much as you can"). 不错！你的意思是清楚的，就是语法有几个问题啊。