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I am looking for developing my Mandarin skills, mainly the speaking area, where I have more difficult. I am very fluent in English, so chinese people whose wants to increase the english and help me, I will apreciate! I also speak portuguese as my native language and I am advanced in Spanish, so feel free to contact me.
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    我觉得你想写这个

     

    Aprender um língua

    Aprender línguas é muito interessante. Eu preciso entender pessoas e falar com pessoas, pois gosto de viajar.

     

    Portuguese grammar structure is very different from chinese. So I think you might want to say about what you should do as 应该, because you probably like to travel (你喜欢旅游). The big difference you will feel is about the way you can link a sentence with the other, using words like: para, pois, etc, not just using comma, as is common in chinese language. 

    But I have to say, I am impressed, since I am studying chinese and I am facing hard time! Keep writing and you are going at the right direction! I will try to support you and correcting your texts.

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    March 26, 2013
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    Dear Angel,

    English is not my first language, but I guess I can help you with some small details.

    Below, there is the your text corrected as I expect is the best way to write with your own words:

     

    Chinese feet bath

    Chinese people like feet massage , It’s good for health. 

    If you wouldn't have conditions to have a feet massage, you could make a feet bath using hot water, that does the same good for health.
    Specially when you catch a cold ,you could make a feet bath until you start sweating on your back, next day your body will be ok.
    I love making feet bath.
    My prescription is: hot water, ginger, salt, white vinegar, milk and laptop.
    Put all of them into the water except the laptop, then put my feet in the hot water filled with condiment, wow, it’s so comfortable! Then I open my laptop and I enjoy my surfing.

     

    As a comment, I have already made a feet massage in China and it was very relaxing! I have never made a feet bath, but now I will, I just cannot forget in not to put the laptop into the water.   :)

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    March 21, 2013
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    March 20, 2013
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    I understand what you are saying, but I believe there is no need of writing "if". You could write without that is correct.
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    March 20, 2013
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    March 19, 2013
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    请给我的说法在中国的语言 一切，你觉得你能帮助我，我很感激。
    March 19, 2013
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    In a clean text, I would write like this with your own words:

     

    Not enough students choose science subjects at the university in a lot of countries. 


    Now a lot of students choose subject from their own interest, so only a few study science subjects. I think this is a common phenomenon at universities in a lot of countries.


    In my opinion, studing is for finding work in the future, so on their own ideal, they want to find joy on their jobs. A lot of students don't like science jobs, they prefer the other subjects, like dancing, drawing, marketing and so on. They want to work on these jobs in the future.


    The science sujects is boring, so learning becomes very tiring and it must take a long time to learn such subjects in average, students have not many freetime to do other things.

     

    It's impossible that every worker do the same job in the world, more and more people will choose their own future by studying some other subjects at universities.


    In the future, less and less students will choose science subjects, but a lot will choose enjoy their own subjects of interest.

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    March 15, 2013
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