My Spider
See,is it cute?Why, you may wonder,do i feed spider? It's ugly and poisonous.But I think it's cute,fluffy and quiet.It never bark and shed hair.I really like spiders and snacks.
I think my spider is female.Because when my friend who is a boy fed it ,it ate much and look energetic.But when I fed it,it becomes lazy and scaring.I remembered one day ,I changed its cage.It showed its long teeth to me .so scared.
I'm strange girl,when i was young ,I fed a caterpillar in home .Because I wanted to know What goes on in a cocoon as a caterpillar changes into a butterfly .Unfortunately I didn't see ,it's died.Now my friends all tell me no one will like you and be your boyfriend,you have already been a boy ,and you have a scaring pet.hahaha...I don't mind it .This is me ,if you like me ,you should like every kinds of me.
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My Spider
See, is Isn't it cute? Why, you may wonder, do I feed a spider? It's ugly and poisonous! But I think it's cute, fluffy, and quiet. It never barks and or sheds hair. I really like spiders and snacks.
I think my spider is female, because when my friend who is a boy fed it, it ate a lot much and looked energetic. But when I feed it, it becomes lazy and scaring scary. I remembered one day, I changed its cage, and it showed its long teeth to me. I was so scared.
I'm a strange girl. When i was young, I fed a caterpillar in home because I wanted to know what goes on in a cocoon as a caterpillar changes into a butterfly. Unfortunately I didn't see - it's died. Now my friends all tell me no one will like you and or be your boyfriend, you have are already been like a boy, and you have a scaring scary pet. Hahaha... I don't mind it. This is me. If you like me, you should like every kinds part of me.
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Well it is very interesting although I couldn't keep such a pet. I am a fan of serpents very much and I would wish to have a real Cobra. Yes, the ones who are deadly even for humans. Anyway from the pictures it seems the spider has very small space. It doesn't look like a real terrarium you got. Just looks like a small glass with some smooth stuff inside. Do you think this is good for the spider? Give it a real terrarium with all kinds of plants and stuff otherwise it might get bored and this might be not good for the spiders health. And if it is really poisonous then you better take care by placing it into another cage okay?
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i like your story pretty much. you are funny. many thanks
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Dear Brittany,
Interesting pet! I do not think you are weird or a strange girl, just different! Keep it like that, otherwise you will not be yourself.
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