我不从事群体思维 我不从事群体思维 = I do not engage in groupthink. 我的翻译对吗？

I wrote a Speech. Can anyone proofread my Chinese Translation? 林疯狂 Linsanity 林疯狂 Linsanity 林疯狂英文的翻议就是 Linsanity Linfengkuang translates to Linsanity in English 中国在NBA打很有趣因为我们是亚洲人我也是中国人 Chinese playing in the NBA are interesting because we're Asians and I'm Chinese. 有过一些中国人在打--王治郅， 孟克·巴特尔， 姚明， 孙悦， 易建联。 姚明最有名。 There have been many Chinese who played in the NBA--Wang Zhi , Bateer Mengke (孟克·巴特尔), Yao Ming, Sun Yue, Yi Jianlian。 Yao Ming is the most famous. 我第一次听到林书豪他还在大学打球。 I first encountered Jeremy Lin in college. 他在哈佛大学打球非常好。 He was playing in Harvard and he was making waves in Harvard. 然后他进去然去金州勇士队。 Afterwards, he made it to the Golden State Warriors. 我想他只是一个新奇。 I thought he was just a novelty. 球探报告说，他拥有的技能，但有一个缺点 The scouting report says he has the skills but has one drawback, 他运球过高，使他犯的错误 he dribbles too high which makes him prone to errors 去,年2月5日而在新泽西网队的结果 Last Feb.5 while checking the results for the New Jersey Nets, 我阅读的分数，他比分了25 I read the boxscores and he scored 25 points. 两场比赛后，他拿下28 two games later he scored 28, 以后他比分了38针对科比和洛杉矶湖人队。我想他是真的了。 Next, he scored 38 against Kobe Bryant and the Lakers I thought he is for real. 科比说球员不出来无处。 Kobe said players like Lin don't come out of nowhere. 他找到合适的系统和机会 He has to find the right system and opportunity. 在我们工作，我们可能无法得到的机会 In our jobs, we might not get opportunities. 等待获得晋升为上级 You might have to wait till your superior moves up. 在林书豪的案件， 在金州勇士队在他的前面有3个控球后卫 In the case of Jeremy Lin, at Golden State Warriors there were 3 point guards ahead of him. 在纽约尼克斯队， 他们的控球后卫受伤了所以林书豪得到机会来玩跟带领。 In New York, an injury to the lead point guard gave him the opportunity to play and lead. 在演讲中，我们提供了一个机会，导致, 带领。 Here in toastmasters we offer such opportunities to shine, to lead. 你有没有林书豪的时刻？ Have you ever had a Jeremy Lin moment?

Pack lite, live long, travel far ”Pack lite, live long, travel far." Google comes up with 包建兴, 长寿, 长途跋涉。 Can anyone suggest a correct or better translation?

怎么样翻译 "around September 5, 2005?" Google comes out with 2005年9月5日左右，

Can anyone come up with a better translation to Chinese? It is time to write another speech in Mandarin. 现在是时候再写普通话演讲.