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i am looking to practice speaking and listening to chinese, to learn enough to become fluent. i am strongly motivated and i have a good knowledge of english, so perhaps prefer exchange to a teacher. [at this stage, anyway.] i am happy to exchange with others, doing mutual teaching. i am male, retired, who travels a lot. i have spent a lot of time in china [a month or two each year for the past decade]. i write books on environment and development.
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    The winter solstice

    Winter solstice is a very important solar term time in the Chinese Lunar calendar.

    Being a traditional holiday as well, it is still now celebrated quite often in many regions. Early during the Spring and Autumn period, 2500 odd years ago from now, the winter solstice was first determined as the a Chinese traditional solar term among the total 24 terms. In the Gregorian calendar, it is around Dec 22nd or 23rd.

    Midwinter day is the very day in North hemisphere with the shortest day and longest night year-round. After it, daytime will become increasingly longer and the coldest clime time will invade all the places on the Northern part of the globe. We Chinese always call it "JinJiu", which means once Winter solstice comes, we will meet the coldest time ahead.

    That conclusion is proved well founded. According to scientific results, on Winter solstice, a right angle is formed by the sun and the tropic of Carpricorn. Thus, the North hemisphere receives the least sunlight and the shortest day and longest night occur.

    Ancient China did pay great attention to this holiday, regarding it as a big event. There was the saying that "Winter solstice holiday is greater than the spring festival". Nowadays, many regions still celebrate it as a big holiday. Northerners may have dumplings and raviolis that day while southerners may have dumplings made by rice and long noodles. Some places even have the tradition to offer sacrifices to the heaven and earth.

     

    THIS IS VERY GOOD WRITING.  IN PRACTICE, 'FROM NOW' REALLY POINTS TO THE FUTURE RATHER THAN THE PAST. 

    AND IN THE SOUTHERN HEMISPHERE, THE OPPOSITE IS TRUE, WE ARE LOOKING FORWARD TO THE HOTTEST TIME OF THE YEAR WITH LONG DAYS...

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    December 21, 2012
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    时间末日,是不是? 在这个网站、报纸有的人谈论主题‘世界末日’。他们都不了解Mayan年历[calendar]。我们的年历大约有三百六十五天,球绕日一次。在Mayan哲学,年历很长、数百年。一个阶段完成了,年历重启。今天,耳零一二年十二月二十一号只是一个阶段王成了,不是Mayan预说世界末日。西方的报纸!在中国一样吗? ‘你们应该了解:在澳大利亚,今天已经过好了’
    December 21, 2012
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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    I am learning English, because my English class grade is not very good.
    My native language is Chinese, and I groew up in China.
    I like singing and danceing. I also like learning English.
    Please help me improve my English.

    HERE YA GO. 

    OR YOU COULD SAY 'MY ENGLISH IS NOT VERY GOOD'

    PAST TENSE: GREW.

    I LIKE TO SING or I LIKE SINGING

    IT'S YOUR ENGLISH THAT NEEDS IMPROVING, NOT THE WHOLE WORLD OF ENGLISH.

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    December 21, 2012
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    English test.

    Today, I have had an English test in school.
    It's too hard for me, because my I don't know enough English words is not enough, so many questions I wcouldn't write the answer written, and I can't or choose the correct answer.

    STUDY HERE: NO TESTS, JUST ACCURATE ENGLISH CORRECTIONS!!!

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    December 21, 2012
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    My Internship

    As an intern in the psychiatry department, everyday for me is full of excitement, and warmth, as well as sadness, challenge and risk. In the This morning, a new patient was sent by ambulance. He was totally out of control. Going mad, he tried to attack the doctors and nurses. With eight people, this guy could be retained restrained finally. People seem to like resorting releasing their tightly-held emotions which cannot be released to through abnormal behaviors. That confuses me sometimes. What Iif nobody can understand me, . Will would I be out of my mind?

    tightly held OR bound OR similar.

    But some questions, Abby: do people like releasing their emotions like this?  Or is this the only way they can release their emotions?  And I don't understand your last two sentences [I know what they mean but I don;t know what you are trying to express].  Do you mean that if no one can understand you then you would perhaps behave like this man?

    but this is very sophisticated english...

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    December 20, 2012
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    澳洲的圣诞节 在澳大利亚我们准备圣诞节。当然有的澳大利亚人是伊斯兰人,犹太人,等等,但是圣诞节是我们第一个节。十二月二十五号,二十六号和一月一号是公共节。很多员工有一个星期休假。学校从十二月二十号到一月底关闭,学生在暑假。现在,在澳大利亚是夏天,没有下雪,不太窜统的。 我觉得在中国圣诞节不太重要。在澳大利亚,神淡季跟你们到过年一样。
    December 19, 2012
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    the correction needs some corrections... [but this is sophisticated english...]

     

    Foggy day with an obscure future of my love

    It's a foggy day in Beijing, and as like i usually do, I hide inside my dormitory, trying to avoid the crowd and the external world. like i usually do.
    He will never reply to to me again. I know that, I knew that, but what's wrong with my heart, it's filled with him. Everything he said and the way he smiles, why can't I get rid of all the those miserable memories.
    It's not even an obscure view, it's dark and sightless.
    Wish that some cannibal will would come and feed on me.

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    December 19, 2012
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    Hi Camille.  This is pretty good and clearly understandable, but there are lots of mistakes too. Capital letters to start sentences, for proper names and for I [as below].

    First notebook entry: Introducing myself

    Hello! mMy name is cCamille, iI'm from cChile,. iI have great expectativestions about eEnglish lenguage,. iI'm kind of reserved; in my free time iI see watch videos, movies, listen to music, paint sometimes and go outside...
    wWell now iI have a lot of free time cuz[!!] imI'm in on vacation, so im I'm very happy. nNext year iI will be studing in the univerity or maybe working, it all depends my test results...
    aAbout my interest -- I i spend a lot of time in on youtube so if you noticed funny videos or good music share it ! ;)

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    December 19, 2012
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    在大学,学习什么课? 我今晚跟我的中国朋在skype友谈话一下。他的外甥女将于去上海面试。他和外甥女都问:学习英文、会计学?我觉得她要学习最有意思的,他们觉得最多的工作机会。你们觉得什么?
    December 17, 2012
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    A True Story (Part 1)

    Have you ever heard an ancient Chinese story, called butterfly lovers? It is a legendary story describing a pair of young people who died for love . In that time, because of arranged marriage, everything anything might happen. Some people may not know what an arranged marriage is,; it means that marriage was arranged by parents, so young people couldn’t marry the one who they loved , and sometimes it even happened that a couple didn’t see each other before they got married. Most of them started 'dating' after marriage. For tThe lucky couples, they lived in peace with each other. The At this time divorce was blamed and laughed at discouraged and frowned upon by most of people, . Sso the unlucky ones who suffered all their life. It happened to my aunts, my father’s sisters. The story I am telling is not legend. It’s true.
    ( to be continued )

    good. 

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    December 17, 2012
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