the correction needs some corrections... [but this is sophisticated english...]

Foggy day with an obscure future of my love

It's a foggy day in Beijing, and as like i usually do, I hide inside my dormitory, trying to avoid the crowd and the external world. like i usually do.
He will never reply to to me again. I know that, I knew that, but what's wrong with my heart, it's filled with him. Everything he said and the way he smiles, why can't I get rid of all the those miserable memories.
It's not even an obscure view, it's dark and sightless.
Wish that some cannibal will would come and feed on me.

Foggy day with an obscure future of my love

It's a foggy day in Beijing, like i usually do, I hide inside my dormitory, trying to avoid the crowd and the external world like i usually do.
He will never reply to me again. I know that, I knew that, but what's wrong with my heart, it's filled with him. Everything he said and the way he smiles, why can't I get rid of all the those miserable memories.
It's not even an obscure view, it's dark and sightless.
Wish that some cannibal will come and feed on me.

Correcting this entry made me jump. As time goes on, you will slowly forget him, wounds will be healed... though scars may remain. Please do not wish for a cannibal to feed on you, live your life to your fullest! Continue posting up diaries like this, it will be a way for you to express your feelings. 加油，别放弃。我们就在这儿。