My family.

I would like to tell you about my family. So, let's get started!
I have a mother. Her name is Natalya. She is 45 years old. She works as a railway employee. Unfortunately, my father was dead died/ or passed away (it's a less violent alternative for "dead") when I was 8. My grandmother's name is Elena. She is 65 years old. She was a used to work as a railway employee when she worked. Nowadays now she takes drives my grandfather's care car of my grandfather. He's name is Michael. He is 75 years old. He really likes football.

My mother has a brother and a sister. As for her brother's name is his name is Andrew. He is 30 years old and he is a railway employee too. He has a girlfriend and she is pregnant. As for my mother's sister, her name is Tanya. She is 39 years old. She is a railway employee too. She is married and she has a son. Her son's name (my cousin) is Cyril. He is 15 years old. He studies at school (primry school,middle school or highschool?).
That's all about my family!

Great presentation of your family!!

just try not to use the full stops too much, replace them with connectors so you ensure a certain connection between your sentences.

Best of luck

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Suatiton: J'ai un problème. Je m'ennuie rapidement et je n'arrive pas a me concentrer sur ce que je fais. J'en essaie beaucoup mais je ne sais pas comment le faire J'ai tant éssayé mais je n'y arrive pas. 
Merci, pour votre intérêt, aices-moi aidez-moi s'il vous plait.

Responsé Response:

Je comprends, pour moi la même chose qui est arrivé à moi moi aussi je suis passé par là, donc je vais vous donner quelques conseils qui peuvent vous aider. Évitez les situations qui vous font sentir ennuyé ennuient, à la recherche et vaquez à des activités qui vous intéressent et vous aident à être plus active; comme jouer à un faire du sport. Maintenant que les choses distraire vous identifie par exemple un téléphone ou de la télévision et d'éviter autant que possible éviter les distractions comme le téléphone ou la télévision, mais surtout essayer de faire les choses comme vous le faites (j'ai pas compris ce que vous voulez dire par là), rappelez-vous que vous avez toujours qu'il y'aura toujours des distractions, mais cela dit, c'est votre attitude qui fait la différence.

Standardised language tests

Studying abroad is one of the most interesting and amazing experiments experiences people may ever try one might ever have in their entire life. ("one" here is the equivalent of the French "on" : l'une des meilleures experiences que l'on pourrait avoir". You can notice that I replaced "may" with "might" because you're speaking from your own perspective, "hypothetically the best experiences", thus the conditional)

But However, to reach their goals, students may have to face and have to prepare themselves to face many (you can also use : a number of, numerous, an erray of, a lot of, just some alternatives) challenges; (the " ; " is usually placed before giving examples or simply enumerations) such as getting enough funds affording the money to pay the fees , preparing an excellent and convincing application, and so on,. But one of the most challenging toughest ones (reread the top of your sentence, you're saying "one of the most challenging challenge", repeating the same idea is called a pleonasm, search for another adjective to decribe how hard it is, like "tough" for instance), is must be to learn the language used in this country's education educational system. And to prove their sufficient language proficiency, they should take a standardised international test with at least a level of B2 a B2 level (upper intermediate).

(you need a connector here to have some kind of logical flow of ideas) Indeed/ In fact, Thanks to social networks, students are provided with the best shortcuts and effective ways to help students from all over the world to learn and exchange languages, and making it easier to reach their dreams.

Best of luck, you're doing great :)

Thank you everybody, I shall look at my errors and try not to reproduce them again, 谢谢 :)