My family.

I would like to tell you about my family. So, let's get started!
I have a mother. Her name is Natalya. She is 45 years old. She works as a railway employee. Unfortunately, my father was dead died/ or passed away (it's a less violent alternative for "dead") when I was 8. My grandmother's name is Elena. She is 65 years old. She was a used to work as a railway employee when she worked. Nowadays now she takes drives my grandfather's care car of my grandfather. He's name is Michael. He is 75 years old. He really likes football.

My mother has a brother and a sister. As for her brother's name is his name is Andrew. He is 30 years old and he is a railway employee too. He has a girlfriend and she is pregnant. As for my mother's sister, her name is Tanya. She is 39 years old. She is a railway employee too. She is married and she has a son. Her son's name (my cousin) is Cyril. He is 15 years old. He studies at school (primry school,middle school or highschool?).
That's all about my family!

Great presentation of your family!!

just try not to use the full stops too much, replace them with connectors so you ensure a certain connection between your sentences.

Best of luck