Definition of globalization.

Globalization is a complex phenomenon related to the growth of economic, social and cultural integration's growth among various areas of the world.
This term is mostly used in with regards to the economy to when describing the market's trend to acquire a global size through the spread of multinational companies.
However, it is not only an economic phenomenon, but it has also has to do with culture, information or with (it's a little redundant to say 'with' again) the environment.
Actually, it affects industry because of the movement of materials and goods around the world and it has financial effects due to the instability of the global financial infrastructure. Globalization also influences politics, with the creation of a global government that regulates the relationships among between individual states; it increases the flow of information flows through mass-medias and cyberspace; it damages the environment because the increasing standard of living of developing countries has led to the building of many factories, with less environmental regulation, which has caused an increase in environmental damage; at last and finally, globalization influences the cultural field because of due to ('because of' is fine but it has been repeated several times) the movement and knowledge of popular culture and the spread of multiculturalism, which might be seen as a risk of to losing one's traditions.
In fact, globalization is also described as a set of factors that weaken or even eliminate individual states, and making everyone people all similar.

<em>Your English is wonderful, my corrections above are solely personal suggestions which are entirely subjective. Also, you're = you are, your is possessive, eg; my, your.....etc I just saw that above and I thought that I should clarify it ;) Best of luck in your exam, not that you need it!</em>
 

If you don't think that this is not a good definition of "globalization", please suggest me a better one to me because I need it for my English test.
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Study and Hobbies

Hi, I (or: I am in University) go to University to study and I am studying medical technology. this year go to I am going into my second year this year and I have some of friends but I like (prefer) to study alone because with friends my concentration is less my concentration is worse when I am with friends, (or: with my friends)

I enjoy of a trekking (hiking) in the mountains (or: I enjoy mountain trekking/hiking) with my camera in on my shoulder and I have some a friends to who have the same likes (interests) as me. I like photography, landscapes (nature), cars and animals.

Buen trabajo ;)

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