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- 聖パトリックの祝日 聖パトリックはアイルランドの守護聖人です。ウェールズに生まれました。そして、アイルランドにキリスト教を呈出しました。 アイルランドの歴史で、とても重要です。聖パトリックの祝日は17日3月です。 この日はアイルランドで、緑の服を着用しています。そして、酒を飲んでと友達と話しています。も、パレードを見ています。 アメリカでこの日はとても人気です。そこでたくさんアイルランド人の子孫がいます。 日本で、この祭りがありますか?日本語で、ウィキペデイアのぺージを読んでみましたがちょっと分かりにくかったです。 St. Patrick is Ireland's patron saint. He was born in Wales and introduced Christianity to Ireland. He is an important person in Irish history. St. Patrick's Day is the 17th of March. In Ireland on this day we wear green clothes. We also drink and talk with friends, and go to see the local parades. This day is also very popular in America because there are so many descendants of Irish people there. Is St. Patrick's Day a big festival in Japan? I tried to read the Wikipedia page in Japanese but it was a bit difficult to understand.March 16, 201430
Nice to meet you
Self Introduction
My name is Bofan. I'm living in Beijing. Currently, I am still a junior at Beijing Film Academy, majoring in Film & TV Production Technology, and specializing in Digital Filmmaking.
I love football. I really like watching Premier League. TV game shows (is this what you mean here?) is also one of my hobbies. But I only play FIFA and Final Fantasy series on PlayStation. And AKB48 is my favourite group. I'd like to meet friends who like Japanese culture.
Finally, I am happy to come here to study language with you guys.Your English is excellent Bofan, only a few very minor mistakes, well done!
あなたの英語は上手ですよ。
0 votedMarch 10, 20141Oral English
Today, I joined (in) an English speaking club. Even though I am able to (know what's) understand the meaning of the sentences, I can't speak out. (Another way to say this sentence would be 'Even though I know the meaning of the sentences, I can't speak out.') My (sound) voice was so low that no one could hear me. It upsets me a little bit, but I won't give up.
Excellent work! I understood the meaning of your sentences very well and there were only a few mistakes. Don't worry, it takes time to become confident in speaking another language, stick with it and you will be fluent in no time!
0 votedMarch 10, 20141MY FRIEND
My friend's name is Sadia. She was at college with me. She comes from Delhi in India but she lives in Muscat now with her family. Her father is a doctor. After Sadia finishes college, her parents want go back to India because her grandfather has a small hospital (in India) there, and they want work there.
Excellent work! You seemed to have a little bit of trouble with the punctuation though. Remember that you must use capital letters for people's names, as well as at the start of every sentence. Aside from this, everything was well written, all very clear and easy to understand. Keep up the good work!
0 votedJanuary 5, 20140Writing Day #11
This year started well. Today I had my backyard cleaned, it really was (needing a great) in great need of a cleaning. I also decided to throw away a lot of useless stuff that was occupying space in my house (without any perspective). (I'm assuming what you meant here was something like ''without any prospective use''. Easier to just say ''useless stuff'' earlier in the sentence.) So I think tomorrow I'll be able to get on/continue with this great work.
Very good, some mistakes but I completely understood what you meant, which is the most important thing. Keep up the good work!
0 votedJanuary 3, 20141Good Morning!
This is the first time I have written here.
Today, I'm going to go to Crossfaith's live show in Shibuya with my friends!
Do you know Crossfaith?? They are the most aggressive metalcore band in Japan.
And I've liked them since before they beame famous. So I'm really (very) looking forward to seeing them again.
I saw them (at) once before, when I saw them at a Summer music festival. So I couldn't go to see them for a long time... (Perhaps ''So I haven't seen them for a long time'' would fit in better here.)
I can't wait for their concert!!!!!Excellent work, only a few mistakes, keep up the good work! I had a listen to Crossfaith, they're brilliant! Are all their lyrics in English or do they sing in Japanese too?
0 votedDecember 11, 20131Nursery
Today, I visited my friends, Key and Riku.
We met at the baby food class organized by the city, and we're in the same group (of) for cooking practice.
(From) Since then, we have been good friends.
That kind of friend is called mama-tomo(mama-friend) in Japanese.
We talked a lot and had a good time.
Our children are going to be 1 year old this month.
We were trying to get a job after their first birthdays.
Key and Riku said they've already got a job.
I haven't got a job yet, but I applied to an unemployment office last week, so I think I'll get one soon.
However, the problem now is the lack of a nursery!
I don't worry about getting a job, but I worry about getting a nursery.
It's a big social issue in Japan.
I applied for the public nursery, but even if my request was approved, it would be April before I hear back from them.
Until then, I have to find a private nursery. It will be (a) hard work.
I feel anxious about getting separated from my sweet baby, but I'm going to go for it!
I hope I'll get a good job and a good nursery for my daughter.Very well written, well done! Most problems seem to be with small connecting words like 'the' or 'a', which I know can be tricky to learn. Good luck on the job search and in finding a nursery for your daughter! 頑張ってください!
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