Writing Day #11

This year started well. Today I had my backyard cleaned, it really was (needing a great) in great need of a cleaning. I also decided to throw away a lot of useless stuff that was occupying space in my house (without any perspective). (I'm assuming what you meant here was something like ''without any prospective use''. Easier to just say ''useless stuff'' earlier in the sentence.) So I think tomorrow I'll be able to get on/continue with this great work.

Very good, some mistakes but I completely understood what you meant, which is the most important thing. Keep up the good work!