MY FRIEND

My friend's name is Sadia. She was at college with me. She comes from Delhi in India but she lives in Muscat now with her family. Her father is a doctor. After Sadia finishes college, her parents want go back to India because her grandfather has a small hospital (in India) there, and they want work there.

Excellent work! You seemed to have a little bit of trouble with the punctuation though. Remember that you must use capital letters for people's names, as well as at the start of every sentence. Aside from this, everything was well written, all very clear and easy to understand. Keep up the good work!