Hello, my name is Peng Li. I hope that someone can help me to correct my English article. A company is going to give some money either to support the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? For a company, funding the charitable activities is very common in modern time. Business wants to enhance their corporate image by giving money to some charitable organization or activities. However, donating money to which activities involves many issues. For example, if people concerned about the protection of artwork, then it will be a good decision for a company to spend money on activities related to arts. In my point of view, a company should give money to protect the environment. Firstly, I think that funding the environmental activities can benefit more people than supporting the arts. Because our mother nature is common wealth for human beings, so donating money to protect the environment can contribute a lot of external benefits. Besides new policy direction of our government mainly focus on sustainable development. A business can enjoy tax deduction by donating money to environmental activities or organization. So, based on these points, I believe that funding natural protection activities is a good choice for a company.

Please help me to correct my article ,thank you! People likes to make friends with others. Sometimes they may face the issue of getting along with opposite sex friends. It is undeniable that sometimes a man may appreciate or even fall in love with a woman when he staying with her. And so do women. However, should we still believe that there is pure friendship between a male and a female? For me, I believe that people can make a truly friend with opposite sex. I think that even people appreciate with each other, that doesn’t mean I like or love him or her. If we always make friends by our hormone, then people cannot find good opposite sex friends. Because if the opposite friend does not love him or her, the connection between two people can be easily broken. Sometimes it is the plot in drama or romantic movies that make people believe there is no any pure friendship between men and women.

Please help me to correct my article ,thank you! When people traveling, visiting museums is always the priority for them. For example, many tourists definitely visit Louvre when they go to French. Always you can see museums are crowd with a large number of tourists from all over the world. And I believe that why people like to visit museums is mainly for culture and economic factor. First, the exhibition in museums can represent the culture of that country. This is the fastest way for people to understand one country. For example, Imperial palaces museum in Beijing have many antique from The Qing Dynasty in China, these can represent Chinese culture by looking at its design or the painting. By analyzing the subject in the painting, people can know ancient life in China. Second, visiting museums is the cost-effective way to travel. Most of the museums are funded by governments, so the ticket price for museums is extremely low. People can just spend around 1 to 5 dollars to hang around all day in museums. So going to museums is the best choice for tourists who do not want to spend a lot of money on the trip.

Fast food For me, I think that fast food is absolutely necessary for modern people. With fast pace in the modern commercial world, people usually seek for efficiency. For example, people want to find the most efficient way to commute, so they take public transportation like the subway. To save time from eating and get enough satisfaction, fast food restaurant can attract the people who are in pursuit of efficiency. However, we cannot ignore the risk of taking fast food. To make food quickly, staffs in fast food restaurant usually add much oil when they cooking, so eating that food make us be obesity and do damage to our health. We must weigh both the advantage and the disadvantage of eating fast food

what are the features that you care about most in a resataurant? When we eat outside, the most important issue we have to think about is that which restaurant we choose to eat. There are many factors that influence our decision. For example, our own budget for a meal will make us eat at the affordable restaurant.On the other hand, our preference to food style is also the crucial factor for deciding which restaurant we go to eat. For me, I will only go the restaurants which are sanitary. I believe that a restaurant must keep their environment hygienic so that customers can enjoy their food without any worry. By contrast, a restaurant which is dirty and unhygienic, customers will avoid eating at that restaurant even if their food is delicious because they cannot guarantee their food is fresh. Also, we go to the restaurant not only seek for the sense of satisfaction but also enjoy the view in the restaurant. A dirty environment in a restaurant will lower people’s appetite. Thank you for your correcting.

Why people are attracted to dangerous sports or dangerous activities?(please help me to correct) Recently extreme sports have become a growing fashion in all over the world. Many people are enthusiastic about this kind of dangerous sports such as sky dive. These sports are totally different from traditional sports like basketball or jogging. People who play extreme sports must have enough courage instead of physical fitness. Since playing such sports is so dangerous, why many people were still fascinated by it? I think that the most important factor is that it can make people excited. Nowadays heavy pressure from working makes people feel upset and boring, even cause depression, so doing dangerous activities becomes an alternative for people to seek the happiness and excitement. For example, one of the companies in my city just built an extreme sports gym for their staffs. And to their surprising, many employees in the company are engaged in playing dangerous sports in the gym, and they asserted that the productive of their staffs have improved since it can help them release pressure in working. So it seems that it is nature for people to seek excitement and playing such sports will become a trend in the foreseeable future.

An English article. Please help me to correct it. Thank you In my opinion, being healthy is the key element to succeed in the life. That is to say, if one can lead a healthy life, then he or she can do things better than if he or she is not healthy Because people who suffer from many diseases cannot do some complex things, they may have to go to see the doctor and make a lot of effort to maintain their body. So such condition prevents them from doing things more quickly or more accurately than people who is free of disease. People who are always busy working may do damage to their bodies because they do not take a rest properly and they suffer pressures both mentally and physically. keep the balance between healthy life and work can give people enough energy to work longer than people who are over-worked. So leading a healthy life is very important to succeed.

I am practicing writing English article. Please help me 2.Which of the following acts have more influence on you, newspaper, TV, or teachers? I think that TV has more influence on me than newspaper and teachers. Because by watching TV, I can absorb much knowledge beyond teachers and newspaper. What I learned from the teacher was academic knowledge which has little use for my life. For the newspaper, I seldom read it so it does not the have huge influence on me. However, I usually watch TV, especially for some programs like discovery or National Geography, which make me know more about our mother nature and develop my interest in researching biology. Besides, by watching the news on TV, I can reach the latest information from all over the world. I can cultivate the international perspective which broadens my horizon.

Please help me to correct my article ,thank you! As for me, I like to read political news. There are several reasons for me to do so. First, by reading political news, I can know more about the new policies in both my countries and foreign countries. These policies may affect my ordinary life. For example, tourism policies in other countries may influence my willingness to travel abroad. Besides, the economic policies also make huge impact on our lives like trade regulation. Also, by analyzing political news, I can cultivate global perspective on my own. Because political event affect all the people every day, so it is very important to have the international viewpoint. Also, I think reading political news is the faster and the most convenient way to connect the world.