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Please help me to correct my article ,thank you! People likes to make friends with others. Sometimes they may face the issue of getting along with opposite sex friends. It is undeniable that sometimes a man may appreciate or even fall in love with a woman when he staying with her. And so do women. However, should we still believe that there is pure friendship between a male and a female? For me, I believe that people can make a truly friend with opposite sex. I think that even people appreciate with each other, that doesn’t mean I like or love him or her. If we always make friends by our hormone, then people cannot find good opposite sex friends. Because if the opposite friend does not love him or her, the connection between two people can be easily broken. Sometimes it is the plot in drama or romantic movies that make people believe there is no any pure friendship between men and women.

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Please help me to correct my article ,thank you!

People likes to make friends with others. Sometimes they may face the issue of getting along with opposite sex friends friends of the opposite sex. It is undeniable that sometimes a man may appreciate or even fall in love with a woman when he is staying with her. And so do women. However, should we still believe that there is pure friendship between a male and a female?
For me, I believe that people can make a truly be friends with the opposite sex. I think that even though people appreciate with each other, that doesn’t mean I like or love him or her. If we always only make friends by based on our hormones, then people cannot find good opposite sex friends friends of the opposite sex. Because if the opposite friend does not love him or her, the connection between two people can be easily broken. Sometimes it is the plot in drama or romantic movies that makes people believe there is not any pure friendship between men and women.

Note: Instead of saying "For me,....." you can instead use "In my opinion,...."

Note: Instead of writing "him or her" and "love or like"....you can instead write "him/her" and "love/like" -




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People likes to make friends with others. Sometimes, they may (1) form friendships face the issue of getting along with members of the opposite gender. sex friends. It is undeniable that sometimes a man may appreciate or even fall in love with a woman when he (2) is staying with her. And so do So can(3) a women. However, should we still believe that there is can be pure friendship between a male and a female?

Hi PengLi, 

(1) When we "face an issue", we encounter a problem. When we "get along" with someone, we are trying to maintain a harmonious relationship with that person. Since you started with the phrase "make friends", I believe you are referring to making friends with others. 

(2) We need a linking verb "is" to link the subject "he" with the verb "staying".

(3) We are explaining that a woman has the choice or ability to have romantic feelings for a man. To convey this ability, we use the modal verb "can".

Cheers,

Lance

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