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Please help me to correct my article ,thank you! As for me, I like to read political news. There are several reasons for me to do so. First, by reading political news, I can know more about the new policies in both my countries and foreign countries. These policies may affect my ordinary life. For example, tourism policies in other countries may influence my willingness to travel abroad. Besides, the economic policies also make huge impact on our lives like trade regulation. Also, by analyzing political news, I can cultivate global perspective on my own. Because political event affect all the people every day, so it is very important to have the international viewpoint. Also, I think reading political news is the faster and the most convenient way to connect the world.

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Please help me to correct my article ,thank you!

As for me, I like to read political news. There are several reasons for me to do so.
First, by reading political news, I can know more about the new policies in both my country and foreign countries. These policies may affect my ordinary life. For example, tourism policies in other countries may influence my willingness to travel abroad. Besides, economic policies also have a  huge impact on our lives like trade regulations.
Also, by analyzing political news, I can cultivate a global perspective on my own. Because political events affect everyone (all the people) every day,  it is very important to have an international viewpoint. Also, I think reading political news is the fastest and the most convenient way to connect the world.


Hello Peng Li,

Just a few small corrections.

Nice work

Bob

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When it comes to reading news,which of the following would you like to read? politics, arts ,sports (What about "human interest" stories?  About cute puppy dogs and kids winning awards, etc.. ;-) )

As for me, I like to read political news. There are several reasons for me to do so. (I think "There are several reasons I feel this way" or "I have several reasons." is better.  "for me to do so" is more like a reason why you have to do or should... but you're saying you "like" to, so it sounds a little strange.)
First, by reading political news, I can know more about (the) new policies in both my countriesy and foreign countries.("the" here makes it specific new policies that might be familiar to the reader but you are just talking in general, so its better without the "the" and just "about new policies"  I mean for instance at any given time, there might not be any new policies.) These policies may affect my ordinary life. For example, tourism policies in other countries may influence my willingness to travel abroad. Besides, the economic policies also makehave a/an huge impact on our lives like (with/for) trade regulation. (Supposedly because its a vowel or "h" you need "an" before "huge" but I never ever hear anyone say "an huge" or "an hotel" or "an hospital" in English. with the vowels, usually "an", and once or twice I've heard "an history" but anyway.  Without that last preposition, the sentence could mean that "Similar to trade regulation, economic policies also have an effect..." in other words I think you mean that the impact is through the trade regulations not like/similar to the trade regulations.  Also, its always "have an impact" not "make".  English is so inconsistent.  Maybe if you were telling someone "Make an impact!" because it emphasizes that you want them to create the impact.)
Also, by analyzing political news, I can cultivate a global perspective on my own. Because political events affect all (the) people every day, so it is very important to have thean international viewpoint.("the people" here and mostly sounds like talking about the people from a political context, like "The people must rise up."  or in court "The people vs OJ Simpson".  In other words its "the" people because its a concept of "people" known to the reader, whereas here you're just talking about people in general.  Also I am pretty sure there is more than one international perspective, so "an" instead of "the".) Also, I think it is the fasterest and (the) most convenient way to connect (to) the world. (I'm not sure which you mean here.  "connect the world" means you think if everyone reads political news they will all understand each other and maybe join hands.  "connect to the world" would mean that you think reading political news brings you closer to world events or allows you, just the news reader, to understand the world better.)
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Please help me to correct my article ,thank you!

I like to read political news (We don't normally start a sentence with "As for me"; it's usually used when comparing between two or more people) for several reasons. Firstly, by reading political news, I can know more about the new policies in both my country (singular, unless you are a dual citizen) and foreign countries. These policies may affect my ordinary life. For example, tourism policies in other countries may influence my willingness to travel abroad. Besides, economic policies, such as trade regulation, also have a huge impact on our lives.

Also, by analyzing political news, I can cultivate a global perspective of my own. Because political events affect everyone ("all the people every day" is not wrong, it just seemed a little awkward and lengthy to me), so it is very important to have an international viewpoint. Also, I think it is the fastest and most convenient way to connect the world. (this last sentence is a little disconnected from the rest of the article - are you saying that news connects the world?).

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Please help me to correct my article ,thank you!

As for me, I like to read political news. There are several reasons why I like them. . for me to do so.


First, by reading political news, I can (get to know) more about the new policies that have been or will be enforced in both my country and foreign countries -- which is important, because these policies may (somehow)affect me / my daily life.

my ordinary life. For example, the tourism policies in some other countries may influence my decision willingness to travel to those places.

abroad. Besides that, any changes in the economic policies of my country or of the other major countries will also have a make huge impact on our lives, such as those on  like trade regulation.


Second, by analyzing political news, I can develop an understanding of /cultivate  global geopolitics perspective on my own. Because Political events around the world can affect all of us,  the people every day, so it is very important for us to be able to look at them from an international /perspective/ point of view. Also, I think reading political news is the fastest and the most convenient way to stay connected to the world around me.

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