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What discovery in the last 100 years has been most beneficial for people in your country?
In the last 100 years, they had a lot of extraordinary discoveries. And each of discoveries had a large impact in the society. But I'm a young people of 24 years old from France, it's impossible to me to talk efficiently about discoveries that appear before I born. That's why I choose to talk about Internet. In my point of view, Internet is the discovery with the larger impact on the people in my country and always people in the entire world. Internet is a discovery who continues to evolve each year. The benefits of the Internet increase every day. In this essay, I will present the four reasons that push me to choose Internet like the best discovery in the last 100 years.
Firstly, Internet offers the possibility to keep in touch with everybody in any situation. For example, if a person in your family decides to go live in foreign country, very far away that your own country, you can communicate with her on real time by Internet. Before Internet, they are only two ways for communicate:
-By phone, but it's really expansive;
-By post, but your letter arrived only after two weeks or more time!
Secondly, Internet is a large base of resources about a large range of various themes. You can read on Internet the literature of writers from around the world. Before internet, when you search some specific information is very hard and long to found it because you need to look for many books in a library.
Thirdly, you have access to information in real time. For example, two weeks ago when terrorist attack happened at Charlie Hebdo in Paris, the entire world could have the information instantly. Internets help to find recent illegal activities of the two terrorists and find the friends who help Kouachi's brothers for terrorist attempt. Each concern countries were able to make link and help France and Europe to fight terrorism.
Fourthly, network is exploding with the discovery of Internet. Now you can talk with someone that you never see physically. About terrorist attack in Paris two weeks ago, only few hours or days after the attack we could see on Facebook an impressive number of people from entire world expressed messages of support to Paris and French people. The sentence "Je suis Charlie" was taken on Twitter by much more than five millions of people.
Internet has been the discovery, in the last 100 years, the most beneficial for people in France for the four reasons discuss in this essay but also for many other reasons. Internet has not finish to surprise us
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Why is music important to many people ?
TOEFL essay - People listen to music for different reasons and at different times. Why is music important to many people? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.
Music is very important for the most people. There are several reasons who explain this passion for music. I will present in my essay the most significant reasons according to my point of view.
First, music is so popular because she is universal. Music is an artistic way for communicate between us. For example, instrumental music can be listening and understanding by anybody in the world who is able to heard sound. The barrier of language isn't a problem.
Second, music has the faculty to gather all the people. Very different categories of person can listen the same music. For example, in a show of Madonna, you can meet people with different age, job, origin, country, ethnic, etc.
Third, anybody who listen a piece of music reminds memories, emotions or feelings. Sometimes, when you listen a sad part of music you remember some difficult life events, etc.
Fourth, music is accessible for anybody, even if you don't have money. Because, each of us can sing or make some nice noise just on clap your hand etc … Everybody can create our own music. The musical possibilities of various creations are infinite.
Fifth, the rhythm of each piece of music is totally different. When people the most part want to dance! Music creates a kind of happiness. A good example is the recent song of Pharell Williams "Happy". This song creates large positive effects on the people in the entire world. Few days after the publication of the song, you can find on YouTube an impressive number of video whit people dancing and laughing!
The last but not le least, music is the rare thing who passes throughout the time. For instance, still today a lot of people listen with passion the music of Mozart or the music of Michael Jackson.
Music is an important part of our life. And each of us uses the "power" of the music for various reasons. The music will forever stay a full art in the entire world no matter the kind of music.
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When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country...
TOEFL essay- When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details.
In our society, more and more people travel around the world. And among them, some people decide to move to another country by choice. Others people decide to move for political reason or because of the war in their country of origin. Whatever the reason of the change, each of them will have to adapt in a new environment. Certain will keep their own customs; others will follow the new customs of the country.
From my point of view, people who decide to keep their own customs, they do it because it's easier. Live in an unfamiliar environment can be very difficult and some of them feel depressed. Keep its own customs is a way to preserve its own culture. And if you have children, it's the best way for teach them our customs and customs will be transmitted from generation to generation. I think it also allows to discover his country and its origins to its new neighbors.
On the contrary, certain people choose to follow the new customs. This choice allows a better and a faster adaptation inside the local population. Secondly, these people, who live with new habits, will have discovered a new culture and a better comprehension thereof.
If I have the possibility to live in another country, I choose to follow the local customs. In my opinion, follow the new customs is included in the experience. If you don't follow the customs, as well stay home. From my point of view, the best choice to live in peace with oneself is to find a balance between to keep and preserve our own culture and to discover and follow the local customs.
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Only people who earn lot of money are successful ?
TOEFL essay - Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
I disagree the statement. People who earn lot of money can be successful but is not obvious; people who don't earn a lot of money can be successful too.
I think is important to define what is to be successful? And how can we evaluate the success between two different people?
The answer to both questions is not unique. It there's as many answers as people on earth. To my mind, people who attain their personal goals are successful. And each goal is totally different between people.
The success can be expressed in several ways:
- help the poor
- be famous
- be praise in his work
- starting a family, …
Moreover, in one life, your goals evolve every day, or at every stage of your life, because you meet some new people and you develop some new aspiration. But, if you don't attain your objectives, are you really not successful for all that? …
My second point of this essay is : What is the place of the money?
Earn a lot of money for some people can be an important goal. But is not only a goal to attain, money afford to realize other goals. Especially in the actual world, money takes an important place in our daily. For example, if you main goal is to travel around the world, inevitably you need money. Because money is on the center of world system. But earn money can't be always help you for goals about relationships, love, family or health; even if you earn a lot of money.
From my point of view, I'm feeling successful, when I will found a passionate job that permit to conciliate my personal life with my professional career.
To conclude, earn a lot of money help us to be successful but be successful doesn't mean earn a lot of money.
Thank you for reading me !
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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient.
TOEFL Essay - Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computer have made life more complex and stressful.
A computer is not only a machine on your desk with a screen, a keyboard and a mouse; it's also the machine in your phone, in your new car or machine for the industries…They are computer everywhere and even in the things you didn’t think. Why do we find so many computers in our daily lives? Just because computers made life easier and more convenient.
First of all, computers avoid repeating some boring tasks, saves time and money. For example in companies, before using computers, bulletins of wage were written by hands for each employee. Now, there are printed automatically.
Secondly, computers and the evolutions related to it, like internet, give access of a wide quantity of information and afford the possibility to communicate easily with people around the world. If you are at dinner with some erudite friends and you don't know something in the conversation, you can right away check the information on your mobile phone and continue the dinner without misunderstanding.
Thirdly, computers improve largely our daily life. Recently, we find more and more connected devices in our daily life, like a watch, scale … Each of these objects consists of a micro-computer who afford to improve our daily. For example, the watch can give you the number of steps for the day, your heart activity, or your email. All of these new functionalities improve and make life easier.
Furthermore, the calculate-power of large computer is used to research in a wide range of fields, like medicine, energy, sciences…
To conclude, computers make our life more convenient in daily but also for large causes.
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TOEFL essay - In general, people are living longer now.
"In general, people are living longer now. Discuss the causes of this phenomenon. Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay."
In 2015, in the well-developed country, people live until an average age of 75 years old. Everybody knows that was not always true by the past. During centuries, people are living more and more longer. This phenomenon can be explained by many reasons. In my essay, I will give you my point of view about the few main reasons who explain this.
The first and the most significant reason are the progress in medicine. A lot of very famous scientific are realized a great discovers who contribute largely of the evolution of the medicine. By example, Hyppocrates discovered microbe and wrote a range of rules about well-practice for increase health. Or Louis Pasteur, who imagined the process of vaccination. Still today, who use vaccination for protect young children against a large range of disease. And Ambroise Paré, a most famous French surgeon, whose the work contributed of the evolution of the surgery. Further, now we know better the causes and the treatments of the most diseases.
Secondly, the quality of the life is better than in the past. The most people drink some good water without microbe and pollution. People eat their fill and the products are less dangerous and more nutritive. Furthermore, in the most country the hygiene is better. For instance, people take regularly a bath or a shower, we wash our hands. And when we are sick we go at the doctor and we doesn’t propagate the disease. With all this little things, we diminish the microbes and we protect himself against problems.
In my point of view, this two main reasons explain largely why people are living longer now than the past.
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