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When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country... TOEFL essay- When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details. In our society, more and more people travel around the world. And among them, some people decide to move to another country by choice. Others people decide to move for political reason or because of the war in their country of origin. Whatever the reason of the change, each of them will have to adapt in a new environment. Certain will keep their own customs; others will follow the new customs of the country. From my point of view, people who decide to keep their own customs, they do it because it's easier. Live in an unfamiliar environment can be very difficult and some of them feel depressed. Keep its own customs is a way to preserve its own culture. And if you have children, it's the best way for teach them our customs and customs will be transmitted from generation to generation. I think it also allows to discover his country and its origins to its new neighbors. On the contrary, certain people choose to follow the new customs. This choice allows a better and a faster adaptation inside the local population. Secondly, these people, who live with new habits, will have discovered a new culture and a better comprehension thereof. If I have the possibility to live in another country, I choose to follow the local customs. In my opinion, follow the new customs is included in the experience. If you don't follow the customs, as well stay home. From my point of view, the best choice to live in peace with oneself is to find a balance between to keep and preserve our own culture and to discover and follow the local customs.

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When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country...

TOEFL essay- When people move to another country, some of them decide to follow the customs of the new country. Others prefer to keep their own customs. Compare these two choices. Which one do you prefer? Support your answer with specific details.


In our society, more and more people travel around the world. and Among them, some people decide to move to another country by choice while others people decide to move for political reasons or because of the war in their country of origin. Whatever the reason of for the change, each of them will have to adapt in to a new environment. Some will certainly Certain will keep their own customs while others will follow the new customs practices of the new country.

From my point of view, people who decide to keep their own customs, they do it because it's easier. Live Life in an unfamiliar environment can be very difficult and some of them feel become depressed. Keep its own Maintaining traditions customs is a way to preserve its one's own culture. And if you have children, it's the best way for to teach them our customs and so that your customs will be transmitted passed down from generation to generation. I think it also allows your new neighbors to discover his learn about your country and its origins to its new neighbors.

On the contraryother hand, certain people choose to follow the new customs. This choice allows provides a better and a faster way to adapt to adaptation inside the local population. Secondly, these the people who live with the new habits will have a better understanding of discovered a their new culture and a better comprehension thereof.

If I have get the possibility opportunity to live in another country, I would choose to follow the local customs. In my opinion, following the new customs is included in part of the experience. If you don't follow the customs, you might as well stay home. From my point of view, in order to live in peace with oneself, the best choice to live in peace with oneself is to find a balance between to keep and preserve preserving our own culture and to discovering and following the local customs.

 

 

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