Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient.

TOEFL Essay - Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful.

A computer is not only a machine on your desk with a screen, a keyboard and a mouse; it's also the machine in your phone, in your new car or machine for the industries…There are computers everywhere and even in the things you didn’t think(you wouldnt expect). Why do we find so many computers in our daily lives? Just because computers made life easier and more convenient.

First of all, computers avoid repeating some boring tasks,which saves time and money. For example in companies, before using computers, bulletins of wage were written by hands for each employee. Now, there are printed automatically.

Secondly, computers and the evolutions related to it, like internet, give access of a wide quantity of information and afford the possibility to communicate easily with people around the world. If you are at dinner with some erudite friends and you don't(understand something they said) know something in the conversation, you can (look it up really quick)right away check the information on your mobile phone and continue the dinner without misunderstanding.

Thirdly, computers improve largely our daily life. Recently, we find more and more connected devices in our daily life, like a watch, scale … Each of these objects consists of a micro-computer who afford to improve our daily.(who can improve our daily lives?) For example, the watch can give you the number of steps you took for the day, your heart activity, or your email. All of these new functionalities improve and make life easier.

Furthermore, the calculating-power of large computers is used for research in a wide range of fields, like medicine, energy, sciences…

To conclude, computers make our life more convenient in daily but also for large causes.(our daily lives more convinent but also are used for important things)

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