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Happy birthday to myself! My birthday is coming soon!! Tomorrow is my birthday, i'll turn to 24. I think I should write something down to remember :) This morning I got many greeting from my friends and family members. I'm not decide how to celebrate my birthday tomorrow. I don't really want to celebrate birthday anymore after 18 years old, that makes me feel I'm getting older T_T Good news is the SPRING BREAK also coming soon. I love spring, I hate the cold winter here. I want to dress my t-shirt and have barque with friends in spring. I am going to Tennessee and Chicago during my spring break :) I'm excited, i can't wait! In China, some friends my age are married. I don't want to think about this serious question now, but if i find a right person maybe i will consider this question :) hmmm...maybe next year?? or the year after next?? lol, i really don't know. Why Chinese girls married so early? Do you really think a girls begin to go downhill once she reach twenty-five? Marriage shouldn't limited by age right? Anyway, don't get lost, keep you faith and go forward :)

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Happy birthday to myself!

My birthday is coming soon!!
Tomorrow is my birthday, i'll turn to 24. I think I should write something down to remember :) This morning I got many this morning greetings from my friends and family members. I'm not decide I have not decided on how to celebrate my birthday tomorrow. I don't really want to celebrate my birthday anymore after 18 years old,. that It makes me feel that I'm getting older T_T
The Ggood news is the that SPRING BREAK is also coming soon. I love spring, but I hate the cold winter here. I want to dress in my t-shirt and have barque with friends in spring. I am going to Tennessee and Chicago during my spring break :) I'm excited,! iI can't wait!
In China, some friends my age are married. I don't want to think about this serious question now, but if i I find a right person maybe i I will consider this question :) hmmm...maybe next year?? or the year after next?? lol, i really don't know. Why do Chinese girls get married so early? Do you really think a girls begin to go downhill once she reaches twenty-five? Marriage shouldn't be limited by age right? Anyway, don't get lost, keep you faith and go forward :)

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Happy birthday to myself!

My birthday is coming soon! 
Tomorrow is my birthday, I'll turn 24. I think I should write something down to remember the day! This morning I got many greetings from my friends and family members. I'm undecided how to celebrate my birthday tomorrow. I don't really want to celebrate my birthday anymore after I turned 18 years old; that makes me feel like I'm getting older. 
The good news is that spring break is also coming soon! I love spring, I hate the cold winter here. I want to dress in my t-shirt and have barbeque with my friends in spring. I am going to Tennessee and Chicago during my spring break. I'm excited, i can't wait!
In China, some friends my age are married. I don't want to think about this serious question now, but if i find a right person maybe i will consider this question. Maybe next year? Or the year after next? I really don't know. Why Chinese girls married so early? Do you really think girls begin to go downhill once she reach twenty-five? Marriage shouldn't limited by age right? Anyway, don't get lost, keep your faith and go forward.

 

Well said! Enjoy Chicago, it is an awesome city.

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Happy birthday to myself!

My birthday is coming soon!!
Tomorrow is my birthday, i'll turn to 24. I think I should write something down to remember :) This morning I got many a lot of greetings from my friends and family members. I'm  not haven't decided how to celebrate my birthday tomorrow. I don't really want to celebrate birthday anymore after 18 years old, that makes me feel I'm getting older T_T
Good news is the SPRING BREAK also coming soon. I love spring, I hate the cold winter here. I want to dress wear my t-shirt and have barbeque with friends in spring. I am going to Tennessee and Chicago during my spring break :) I'm excited, i can't wait!
In China, some friends my age are married. I don't want to think about this serious question now, but if i find a right person maybe i will consider this question :) hmmm...maybe next year?? or the year after next?? lol, i really don't know. Why do Chinese girls married so early? Do you really think a girls begin to go downhill once she they reach twenty-five? Marriage shouldn't limited by age right? Anyway, don't get lost, keep your faith and go forward :)

 

 

Well written and Happy Birthday.

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