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Happy birthday to myself!
My birthday is coming soon!!
Tomorrow is my birthday, i'll turn to 24. I think I should write something down to remember :) This morning I got many this morning greetings from my friends and family members. I'm not decide I have not decided on how to celebrate my birthday tomorrow. I don't really want to celebrate my birthday anymore after 18 years old,. that It makes me feel that I'm getting older T_T
The Ggood news is the that SPRING BREAK is also coming soon. I love spring, but I hate the cold winter here. I want to dress in my t-shirt and have barque with friends in spring. I am going to Tennessee and Chicago during my spring break :) I'm excited,! iI can't wait!
In China, some friends my age are married. I don't want to think about this serious question now, but if i I find a right person maybe i I will consider this question :) hmmm...maybe next year?? or the year after next?? lol, i really don't know. Why do Chinese girls get married so early? Do you really think a girls begin to go downhill once she reaches twenty-five? Marriage shouldn't be limited by age right? Anyway, don't get lost, keep you faith and go forward :)
Happy birthday to myself!
My birthday is coming soon!
Tomorrow is my birthday, I'll turn 24. I think I should write something down to remember the day! This morning I got many greetings from my friends and family members. I'm undecided how to celebrate my birthday tomorrow. I don't really want to celebrate my birthday anymore after I turned 18 years old; that makes me feel like I'm getting older.
The good news is that spring break is also coming soon! I love spring, I hate the cold winter here. I want to dress in my t-shirt and have barbeque with my friends in spring. I am going to Tennessee and Chicago during my spring break. I'm excited, i can't wait!
In China, some friends my age are married. I don't want to think about this serious question now, but if i find a right person maybe i will consider this question. Maybe next year? Or the year after next? I really don't know. Why Chinese girls married so early? Do you really think girls begin to go downhill once she reach twenty-five? Marriage shouldn't limited by age right? Anyway, don't get lost, keep your faith and go forward.
Well said! Enjoy Chicago, it is an awesome city.
Another version...
Happy birthday to myself!
My birthday is coming soon!!
Tomorrow is my birthday, i'll turn to 24. I think I should write something down to remember :) This morning I got many a lot of greetings from my friends and family members. I'm not haven't decided how to celebrate my birthday tomorrow. I don't really want to celebrate birthday anymore after 18 years old, that makes me feel I'm getting older T_T
Good news is the SPRING BREAK also coming soon. I love spring, I hate the cold winter here. I want to dress wear my t-shirt and have barbeque with friends in spring. I am going to Tennessee and Chicago during my spring break :) I'm excited, i can't wait!
In China, some friends my age are married. I don't want to think about this serious question now, but if i find a right person maybe i will consider this question :) hmmm...maybe next year?? or the year after next?? lol, i really don't know. Why do Chinese girls married so early? Do you really think a girls begin to go downhill once she they reach twenty-five? Marriage shouldn't limited by age right? Anyway, don't get lost, keep your faith and go forward :)
Well written and Happy Birthday.
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