Writting a Letter : Topic - compliant
Hi all.
Thanks for watching my notebook. I am practicing writing a letter now!
The topic of my letter is describing a bad service experience you have received.
I really appreciate you helping me to correct it. Any suggestion is a good suggestion for me.
The letter I wrote is:
_______________________________________________________________________________
Dear Sir or Madam
I had a business trip to Toronto last week. After I review the comment on the website, I decided to live your hotel from Monday to Friday. I am writing to complain about the service I have received at your hotel.
Last Monday, I arrived at your hotel around 9 p.m. because of a delayed flight. When I arrived at the reception desk, nobody was there. I pushed the bell and waited about 30 minutes then a man finally showed up. However, he didn’t apologize, he just asked about my booking information. The worse thing was he could not find my booking record, even though I showed up my reservation number. Finally, he called another stuff and resolved the problem. When I got my room key, it was already 10 p.m.
I was exhausted last Monday night. I hope I can get a relax quickly, but I waited in the lobby for about 30 minutes and spent another 30 minutes to check in. I think your reception stuff was unprofessional and did not provide me with good service.
Regards,
Fin
_______________________________________________________________________________
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Writting a Letter : Topic - complaint
Hi all.Thanks for reading my notebook. I am practicing writing a letter now!
The topic of my letter is describing a bad service experience you have received.
I really appreciate you helping me to correct it. Any suggestion is a good suggestion for me.
The letter I wrote is:
_______________________________________________________________________________
Dear Sir or Madam
I had a business trip to Toronto last week. After I reviewed the comment on the website, I decided to stay at your hotel from Monday to Friday. I am writing to complain about the service I have received at your hotel.
Last Monday, I arrived at your hotel around 9 p.m. because of a delayed flight. When I arrived at the reception desk, nobody was there. I pushed the bell and waited about 30 minutes then a man finally showed up. However, he didn’t apologize, he just asked about my booking information. The worse thing was he could not find my booking record, even though I showed up my reservation number. Finally, he called another staff and resolved the problem. When I got my room key, it was already 10 p.m.
I was exhausted last Monday night. I had hoped that I could rest quickly, but I waited in the lobby for about 30 minutes and spent another 30 minutes checking in. I think your reception staff was unprofessional and did not provide me with good service.
Regards,
Fin
_______________________________________________________________________________
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Writing Writting a Letter : Topic - compliant complaint
Hi all.Thanks for watching reading my notebook. I am practicing writing a letter now!
The topic of my letter is describing a bad service experience you have received had. (Using "received" does work, but using "had" sounds more natural)
I really appreciate you helping me to correct it. Any suggestion is a good suggestion for me.
The letter I wrote is:
_______________________________________________________________________________
Dear Sir or Madam
I had a business trip to Toronto last week. After I reviewed the comments on the website, I decided to live stay at your hotel from Monday to Friday. I am writing to complain about the service I have received at your hotel.
Last Monday, I arrived at your hotel at around 9 p.m. because of a delayed flight. When I arrived at the reception desk, nobody was there. I pushed the bell and waited for about 30 minutes then until a man finally showed up. However, he didn’t apologize, he just asked about my booking information. The worse thing was he could not find my booking record, even though I showed up my reservation number. Finally, he called another stuff staff member and resolved the problem. When I got my room key, it was already 10 p.m.
I was exhausted last Monday night. I hope had hoped that I can get a relax could rest/ start relaxing quickly, but I waited in the lobby for about 30 minutes and spent another 30 minutes to check checking in. I think your reception stuff was unprofessional and did not provide me with good service.
Regards,
Fin
_______________________________________________________________________________
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I'm not sure about the grammatical things, but i'm pretty sure that you have a typo on your title, you mean complain, didn't you?
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