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Bonjour! J’habite en Nouvelle-Zélande et j'étudie le français depuis 3 ans. J’apprends le francais parce que je l’aime et je voudrais pouvoir parler avec les gens Français. Un jour je veux aller en France aussi. Si vous voulez une personne à parler l’anglais je serais heureuse de parler avec vous!
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Writing Writting a Letter : Topic - compliant complaint
Hi all.
Thanks for watching reading my notebook. I am practicing writing a letter now!
The topic of my letter is describing a bad service experience you have received had. (Using "received" does work, but using "had" sounds more natural)
I really appreciate you helping me to correct it. Any suggestion is a good suggestion for me.
The letter I wrote is:
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Dear Sir or Madam
I had a business trip to Toronto last week. After I reviewed the comments on the website, I decided to live stay at your hotel from Monday to Friday. I am writing to complain about the service I have received at your hotel.
Last Monday, I arrived at your hotel at around 9 p.m. because of a delayed flight. When I arrived at the reception desk, nobody was there. I pushed the bell and waited for about 30 minutes then until a man finally showed up. However, he didn’t apologize, he just asked about my booking information. The worse thing was he could not find my booking record, even though I showed up my reservation number. Finally, he called another stuff staff member and resolved the problem. When I got my room key, it was already 10 p.m.
I was exhausted last Monday night. I hope had hoped that I can get a relax could rest/ start relaxing quickly, but I waited in the lobby for about 30 minutes and spent another 30 minutes to check checking in. I think your reception stuff was unprofessional and did not provide me with good service.
Regards,
Fin
_______________________________________________________________________________0 votedJuly 28, 201802018/07/20
I get got up early today!
The reason is that I have a promise promised to meet with the person who I like and respect.
We want to use the morning time effectively, so we go to our university at 8:00.
I did my to do very effectively. (What are you trying to say here?)
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0 votedJuly 20, 20181Day 4: Cake Fail
Yesterday was my aunt's birthday and we celebrated it here at my granny's house. We all had dinner together and then she left for her went home with her husband and stepson. She doesn't like cakes cake, so we didn't get one for her. However, her students' parents - she's a teacher - got her one to the at school and she had brought it here. My siblings and I didn't know this, so when we found a cake in the kitchen we were happily surprised and asked for permission to eat it. My mama allowed us and we were craving so bad for the cake, although it was covered with fondant and we are not particularly into that type of cake. We finally cut it and... We discovered that it was made by with styrofoam. The students' parents had brought it to take birthday pictures of her with the children and my aunt had forgotten to tell us.0 votedJuly 20, 20181The cat
I had have a cat. It's beautiful. It's fur Fur's cat is white, it's two eyes of cat is are black. In the morning the cat is often lying in the front yard, sunbathing. of the sun bathing yard. It's It uses it's feet to stroked it's chin/ it's whiskers bearded. My son likes the cat.0 votedJuly 20, 20180
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