Forth Toefl essay ( I will take toefl on saturday)
In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
When I was a teenager, I had the experience of have a part-time job, which was very good to me. Moreover, I had saw some of my friends spend their free time with non-productive things. I think that have a job while a teenager still is a student can be a nice idea for the reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
Firstly, I think that work as a teenager student is great to grown in a more focused way. I worked two years in a law office while I still was in High School. This experience was very important to me because I had to become a more responsible person. In addition, the learnings that I had were so interesting that I choice to get a degree in Law. The responsibility that I got in a so young age was so significant for the reason that I started to see the life in a very more mature way and so, I begin to be a more hard-working person to achieve my goals. I know that I would not have pass with honours on my university without have learnt to be more focused and responsible thanks to my job.
Secondly, teenagers used to do some non-productive things and to have a work can to guide to have a more productive time. Before I had had my job, I used to spend a lot of time playing silly games on the internet, which had not taught me anything. Afterwards, the legislation of my country impose some conditions to allow the teenager work, like have the right of a limited work hours for do not harm my school time, for example. Therefore, I had worked in comfortable conditions and nobody is forced to work as a teen, so is an option that do not prejudice anyone.
In conclusion, I think that allow the teenager student work is a very nice idea because possibility that a teen can have a change to developing in a more mature and responsible way. Furthermore, a part-time job allows that the a teenagers can to use his free-time in a more productive way.
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In conclusion, I think that the end, allowing the teenagers student to work is an excellent way to help develop their sense of maturity and responsibilities. very nice idea because possibility that a teen can have a change to developing in a more mature and responsible way. Furthermore, a part-time job allows that the a teenagers can to use his free-time in a more productive way. If you are trying to satisfy the word limit of an essay, this is not a good way to repeat things. Tell the reader something more and interesting. For example, you can write like this to fulfill the requirement. I know so. I had experienced the benefits of it and I am now able to face society on my own. A part-time job is something that I will recommend to all teenagers.
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Forth Toefl essay ( I will take toefl on saturday)
In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.When I was a teenager, I had the experience of have having a part-time job, which was very good to me. Moreover, I had saw have seen some of my friends spend their free time with non-productive things. I think that have having a job while a teenager still is still a student can be a nice idea for the reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
Firstly, I think that work as a teenager student is great to grown in a more focused way. I worked two years in a law office while I still was still in High School. This experience was very important to me because I had to become a more responsible person. In addition, the learnings that I had things I learnt were so interesting that I choice chose to get a degree in Law. The responsibility that I got in at such a so young age was so significant for the reason that I started to see the life in a very more mature way and so, I begin began to be a more hard-working person to achieve my goals. I know that I would not have passed with honours on my university without have having learnt to be more focused and responsible thanks to my job.
Secondly, teenagers used to do some non-productive things and to have a work can to guide them to have a more productive time. Before I had had my job, I used to spend a lot of time playing silly games on the internet, which had not taught me anything. Afterwards, the legislation of my country imposed some conditions to allow the teenagers to work, like have having the right of a limited work hours for do not so as not to harm my school time, for example. Therefore, I had worked in comfortable conditions and nobody is forced to work as a teen, so it is an option that does not prejudice anyone.
In conclusion, I think that allowing the teenagers student work is a very nice idea because possibility that a teen can have a change to developing in a more mature and responsible way. Furthermore, a part-time job allows that the a teenagers can to use his their free-time in a more productive way.
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Forth Toefl essay ( I will take toefl on saturday)
In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.When I was a teenager, I had the experience of have a part-time job, which was very good to me. Moreover, I had seen some of my friends spend their free time with non-productive things. I think that having a job while a teenager is still a student can be a nice idea for the reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
Firstly, I think that work as a teenage student is great to grow in a more focused way. I worked two years in a law office while I was still in High School. This experience was very important to me because I had to become a more responsible person. In addition, the things that I had learned were so interesting that I chose to get a degree in Law. The responsibility that I received at a young age was very significant because I started to see the life in a more mature way. So, I began to be more of a hard-working person to achieve my goals. I know that I would not have passed with honors at my university without having learned to be more focused and responsible thanks to my job.
Secondly, teenagers do some non-productive things and to have a job can to guide them to be more productive. Before I had my job, I used to spend a lot of time playing silly games on the internet, which had not taught me anything. Afterwards, the legislation of my country imposed some conditions to allow teenagers to work; like having the right amount of limited work hours so that it did not harm my school time, for example. Therefore, I worked in comfortable conditions and nobody is forced to work as a teen. So it is an option that does not cause prejudice to anyone.
In conclusion, I think that allowing teenage students to work is a very nice idea because it creates a possibility that a teen can change and develop in a more mature and responsible way. Furthermore, a part-time job allows those teenagers to use their free-time in a more productive way.
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Firstly, I think that work as a teenager student is great to grown in a more focused way. Having a job helps a teenager to become more focused in their responsibility. I had worked for two years in a law office while I still being was in high school. This experience was very important to me because I had helped greatly to become a more responsible person. Not only this, In addition, learn how to write warmly. These terms are cold and too business like. You sound like you are lecturing the reader. the learnings that I had things/knowledge learnt/gained were so interesting that I decided choice to get a degree in Law. The responsibility that I got in a so young age was so Too wordy... This was significant for the reason that in that I started to see the life in a very more mature way. and so, I began to be a more hard-working person even harder to achieve my goals. I know that I would not have passed with flying colors if not knowing what real responsibility is honours on my university without have learnt to be more focused and responsible thanks to my job. Again too pedantic.
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Fourth Toefl TOEFL essay ( I will be taking it toefl on Saturday) You need to be careful with such errors! Marks will be deducted off in your exams for not knowing even the basics.
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