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Forth Toefl essay ( I will take toefl on saturday)
In some countries, teenagers have jobs while they are still students. Do you think this is a good idea? Support your opinion by using specific reasons and details.
When I was a teenager, I had the experience of have a part-time job, which was very good to me. Moreover, I had seen some of my friends spend their free time with non-productive things. I think that having a job while a teenager is still a student can be a nice idea for the reasons that I will explain in the following essay.
Firstly, I think that work as a teenage student is great to grow in a more focused way. I worked two years in a law office while I was still in High School. This experience was very important to me because I had to become a more responsible person. In addition, the things that I had learned were so interesting that I chose to get a degree in Law. The responsibility that I received at a young age was very significant because I started to see the life in a more mature way. So, I began to be more of a hard-working person to achieve my goals. I know that I would not have passed with honors at my university without having learned to be more focused and responsible thanks to my job.
Secondly, teenagers do some non-productive things and to have a job can to guide them to be more productive. Before I had my job, I used to spend a lot of time playing silly games on the internet, which had not taught me anything. Afterwards, the legislation of my country imposed some conditions to allow teenagers to work; like having the right amount of limited work hours so that it did not harm my school time, for example. Therefore, I worked in comfortable conditions and nobody is forced to work as a teen. So it is an option that does not cause prejudice to anyone.
In conclusion, I think that allowing teenage students to work is a very nice idea because it creates a possibility that a teen can change and develop in a more mature and responsible way. Furthermore, a part-time job allows those teenagers to use their free-time in a more productive way.Good job!!
0 votedSeptember 15, 20161It's kind of a short holiday
Me and my family took three days off. We went to Semarang, Central Java. It's because of my cousin's wedding. The wedding is on Sunday morning but the other traditional things they have to do before the wedding start on Saturday night. We decided to go early because if we go to Semarang on the day of the event or the day before, we would feel very exhausted. Finally, we arrived safely at the hotel about 3 am after 11 hours driving. It was very exhausting for us. Hope we get a lovely day tomorrow.Very good Ria!
0 votedSeptember 15, 20161- Bonjour! Bonjour! Je m'appelle Britta et je suis américaine. J'apprends le français. Je sais juste un petite français et mon objectif est à apprend beaucoup. Je sais juste un langue couramment, anglais. Un jour je vais alle à France ou Quebec et je vais parle avec les locales personnes! Je regarde les filmes de français avec sous-titres. C'est utile! Merci d'avoir lu!September 15, 201641
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Hello! Allow me to make corrections for you:
What are the main differences between British English and American English?
Which one do you like the most?To answer your question:
The main difference is the vocabulary. I know the British use different slang, and also still use some "old-english" words. Then of course there is the obvious difference of dialects (accents).
0 votedOctober 21, 20132Hello! Allow me to make corrections and rephrase some things for you:
I love Fridays! Friday is the last day of the week that I have to go to work! I prefer to go to church.
Today, it's raining again. In the morning it was sunny, but then around 2 p.m. it was raining. It's still raining now! I went to work this morning. After I went to had lunch with my co-worker as well. We like to read books. Today we were both very happy, because we read a dozen books together! I love to read! I want to become a writer some day. I like to read the books of Sidney Sheldon. Good, After the lunch, I came home. I had to take three buses. Later in the afternoon, I played with my nieces. I have two nieces, Giovanna and Sophia. Giovanna is ten years old and Sophia is six years old. We pretended that Sophia was my daughter and that it was her birthday. I also pretended that I took her to the Zoo, so I had to imitate some animals. Afterwards, we played with their dolls. I like to play with my nieces because this way I can have good moments with them.
*Nice job. Keep up the good work!
0 votedOctober 19, 20130Hello! Allow me to make corrections for you:
It's been a long time that I have written something on here.
These days, I've been studying my major, computer engineering.
I have also been thinking about my future.
For a moment, I wanted to work as an editor for fashion or music.
So I worked as a fashion photographer and curator.
After doing what I wanted to do, I realized that first I have to finish my studying at my University.
If i'm good at my major. i can make something new in fashion or other part making application.
So before I finish, I'm going to start blogging. I think it will be funny. Haha!
And I may also study English again. For 6 months, I didn't study English.
From now on, I will write something on here. Haha!* Nice job. Keep up the good work!
0 votedOctober 19, 20132Hello! Allow me to make corrections for you:
I’d like to introduce my family. There are four people in my family: my father, my mother, younger brother, and me. My father is 53 years old, and a truck driver. He’s a little strict, but sometimes he’s kind. When I was a child, we went to the park. My mother is 47 years old. She works a part time job. She likes reading books, and reads “Anne of Green Gables”. My younger brother is 15 years old, and a high school student. He likes cooking and would like to be a chef in the future.
My brother and I don’t look alike in our faces. My brother looks like our father, and I look like our mother. Most people look our picture and tell me, “You and your brother don’t look alike”. I often brawled with my brother over 5 years ago but then we started to talk more.
We enjoy talking in my home every weekend. We sometimes go to the mall, but we’re in the home most of time. I really feel relaxed in my home because I think we’re close family. We’re planning to eat out sometime soon. I can’t wait to eat out with my family.
I appreciate everything about my family. If they’re in trouble, I’d like to help them as fast as possible.* Nice job. Keep up the good work!!
0 votedOctober 19, 20131
