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下雨的时候。
我不认识你,你也不认识我。
一朵朵白云漂/飄票在天上。
下大雨,大地如同盖了眼泪。
在这里,除了我们之外没有别人。
我站着看你,没有人知道什么时候停止下雨。
只有我一个人知道,
此时此刻是最好的时候
Just a suggestion or alternate translation...
I don't know who you are 你是何人我不识
You don't know who I am too. 誰家我你亦非曉
There were a lot of clouds in the sky 天空曾經萬朵雲
Heavy rainfall like the ground covered by tears. 地上雨水如泪鋪
You and me,there's no one else here. 此處你我無他人
I stand here looking at you. 站着瞧瞧你容顏
No one knows when it stop raining 隨時雨停何人知
Only me who knows that this moment is the best time. 唯我知曉此刻至佳時‧
下雨的时候。
我不认识你,你也不认识我。
一朵朵白云票在天上。(票应该用飘,而后面描写的是下雨天,不应该是白云而是乌云,逻辑问题)
下大雨,大地如同盖了(眼里)浸满了眼泪(运用拟人的修辞手法)。
在这里,除了我们之外没有别人。
我站着看你,没有人知道什么时候停止下雨会停下(原来的的表达也没错,但是后置会显得更加优美、文艺)。
只有我一个人知道,
此时此刻是最好的时候
I don't know who you are
You don't know who I am too.
There were a lot of clouds in the sky
Heavy rainfall like the ground covered by tear.
You and me,there's no one else here.
I stand here looking at you.
No one knows when it stop raining
Only me who know that this moment is the best time.
下雨的时候。
我不认识你,你也不认识我。
一朵朵白云飘在天上。
下大雨,大地如同被眼泪覆盖了。
在这里,除了我们之外没有别人。
我站着看你,没有人知道雨什么时候停。
只有我一个人知道,
此时此刻是最好的(Better delete 时刻 here)
I don't know who you are
You don't know who I am either.
There were a lot of clouds in the sky
Heavy rainfall like the ground covered by tears.
You and me,there's no one else here.
I stand here looking at you.
No one knows when it stop raining
Only me who know that this moment is the best time.
下雨的时候。
我不认识你,你也不认识我。
一朵朵白云飘在天上。
下大雨的时候大地如同被眼泪覆盖。
在这里,除了我们之外没有别人。
我站着看你,没有人知道雨什么时候停。
只有我一个人知道,
此时此刻是最好的时候。
I don't know who you are
You don't know who I am too.
There were a lot of clouds in the sky
Heavy rainfall like the ground covered by tear.
You and me,there's no one else here.
I stand here looking at you.
No one knows when it stop raining
Only me who know that this moment is the best time.
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