我的生活: My life (My first note in Chinese)

我的生活: My life (My first note in Chinese)

I correct some mistakes.  

我十七岁了和我是巴西人。 should be 我是巴西人，我十七岁了。because they are two different sentences, 和 cannot be used to link two whole sentence. it can link two words or phrases.  

but I don't know if "他是我爷爷商店的经理= my father is a manager in my grandfather's shop" is what you want to say.

我的生活: My life (My first note in Chinese)

我的妈妈是（you can also say 叫)Elaine。  MY mom is Elaine.“ is” can be translated into 叫or 是

她很亲爱和蔼和漂亮.她三十七岁了。她工作如是一位老师。（"she works as a teacher "means "she is a teacher "which  shoud be into 她是一名老师.)

我的爸爸是（叫)Alcides.他是经理的他的商店同我的爷爷。他 和我的爷爷 一起 经营他的商店。( he manages his shop with my grandfather. when you say this in chinese, you should pay attention to the order of the words.)

他四十四岁了。

多谢谢。。。非常感谢

我的生活: My life (My first note in Chinese)

我的生活: My life (My first note in Chinese)