My first time

This is the first time that I´m writing in this page and the first time I´m writing a text in English. I´m learning English because is important for a lot of things: for find a new job, for travel and meet another people, but my level it´s elemental and it´s difficult start and learn a new skill.
I don´t have much money because I lost my job one month ago, and learn English It´s good for find a new job. And keep my mind working.
Thanks for read my text and lost you time in help me

Regards!!!

My first time

This is the first time I have wrote on this page and the first time I have wrote a text in English. I´m learning English because it is important for a lot of things like communicating, for traveling and meeting other people, but my level is elementary and it's difficult to learn a new skill.
I don´t have much money because I lost my job last month, and learning English is good for finding a new job and to keep my mind working.
Thanks for reading my text and using your time to help me.

I highlighted what I corrected :)

My first time

This is the first time that I´m writing on this page and the first time I´m writing a text in English. I´m learning English because it is important for a lot of things like finding a new job, for traveling and meeting other people, but my level is elementary and it's difficult to learn a new skill.
I don´t have much money because I lost my job one month ago, and learning English is good for finding a new job will keep my mind working.
Thanks for reading my text and using your time to help me.

Regards!!!

My first time

This is the first time that I´m writing / I have written on this page and the first time I´m writing a text in English. I´m learning English because it is important for a lot of things: to find a new job, for travelling and meeting another people, but my level it´s is elementary and it´s difficult to (start learning a foreign language and) learn a new skill.
I don´t have much money because I lost my job one / a month ago, and learning English It´s is good for finding a new job. It will also keep my mind working.
Thanks for reading my text and spending / taking your time to help me.

Regards!!!