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My first time
This is the first time that I´m writing in this page and the first time I´m writing a text in English. I´m learning English because is important for a lot of things: for find a new job, for travel and meet another people, but my level it´s elemental and it´s difficult start and learn a new skill.
I don´t have much money because I lost my job one month ago, and learn English It´s good for find a new job. And keep my mind working.
Thanks for read my text and lost you time in help me
Regards!!!My first time
This is the first time I have wrote on this page and the first time I have wrote a text in English. I´m learning English because it is important for a lot of things like communicating, for traveling and meeting other people, but my level is elementary and it's difficult to learn a new skill.
I don´t have much money because I lost my job last month, and learning English is good for finding a new job and to keep my mind working.
Thanks for reading my text and using your time to help me.0 votedApril 9, 20151Happiness
I'm so glad to improve my English with all of th world. I Don't know why I'm so afraid, but I know I can do that
Happiness is something achieved by doing something you enjoy or having something.
I'm so happy to improve my English with (the whole world) (all the world). I don't know why I'm so afraid, I know I can (do it)(achieve it).
0 votedApril 9, 20151please correct my assignment. thank you.
Approximately 70% of (diseases) affecting humans today (are) (diseases) that can be transmitted directly from animals. (These) (diseases) (are) known as zoonoses. Zoonoses are diseases that can be transmitted from animals to humans or from humans to animals with the same (circumstances). Due to many people who still do not understand zoonotic diseases, we take the initiative to educate the public (so they) know more about what zoonotic (diseases are). In this modern age, the phone development has (quickly) (progressed) and (raised) advanced communication technologies, one of (those) is a smartphone. (People) in large numbers generally use smartphones to communicate and find information, by downloading Android applications, they can store information on their smartphones. Android is an operating system for mobile devices that allows everyone to be able to use their own Android applications. The convenience offered allows us to introduce zoonoses to the public through the Android OS. Applications will be available in Android as named ZoApps. ZoApps are Android applications that provide information about zoonotic diseases that often occur between animals (eg, cattle, poultry, aquatic, and wildlife) and humans. The purpose of ZoApps is to provide information, education, and instructional media about zoonotic diseases that often affect the public health, with the hope to increase the public knowledge of the diseases that can be transmitted from humans to animals and vice versa. Also to raise public awareness to be more concerned about the health of the animal. Therefore, ZoApps applications are expected to provide solutions to prevent zoonotic diseases (the diseases that can be transmitted from animals to humans and vice-versa).
wow i stopped changing content halfway through as I was rewriting a lot, so I changed it to what I think it should be like, you didn't take this article from the web by any chance did you? hehe well if you did there was a lot of changing from singular to plural throughout (it was badly written). you can read through my correction and compare it to the one you wrote. By the way the end bit in brackets I left but really this has been explained within the article so has no need to be there. Also Android is an operating system which is required to run android applications just like windows apps need windows os you can't run an android app on windows os and vice versa you can't run a windows app on android os
0 votedApril 9, 20151Cup noodles are my love (I love cup noodles)
I know instant food is not good for our health, but I just can't stop eating them. Especially, my favorite one --- tom yum goong noodles. This spicy Thai taste is absolutely addictive and became popular in Tokyo quickly!
The Japanese food maker has factories in Thailand, so they can produce authentic thai food. One of my friends in Thailand said they are popular there, too. If you have a chance, go to a convenience store in Thailand or Japan, to try these cheap but awesome tasty noodles. I'm going to buy them again...We never buy one noodle, always some, thats why we use the plural forms -es, s, they,them, are, these
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