My corrections are the highlighted parts of the sentences.
Please correct the sentences below?
Please correct the sentences below?
It would be great if you could help me to make them better as well.
Thank you in advance.
Exercise allows keeping the flexibility of body which is significant for firefighter, due to encounter with complex and variety missions. Excercise allows the body to be flexible which is important for firefighters due to their encounters with a variety of complex missions/situations.
Based on this technique, flexibility of the process is kept as well as increasing the ability of process to create complex parts, which has received considerable attention recently. Based on this technique, the flexiblity of the process and the ability of the process to create complex components has recieved a considerable amount of attention recently.
Defining a solution's path is one of the complexities of analyzing of the process.
According to the solution's path equipment of the process was designed and manufactured. The solution's path equipment was designed and manufactured.
The analysis indicated that "A" has extremely less proportion compared with "B".
The analysis indicated that "A" in comparison to "B" is extremely less proportioned.
Therefore, suitable pressure is created at the tool and part conjunction, due to higher height at the ?point. (I believe there should be another word at ? but I do not know the topic.)
Great job by the way! Good vocabulary.
