下雨（Traditional Chinese)
今天天氣不好。外邊多雲， 下雨。現在是秋天但是好像冬天。我不喜歡這麼冷的天氣。
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下雨（Traditional Chinese)
今天天氣不好,外邊多雲又下雨。雖然現在是秋天，但是感覺卻好像冬天。我不喜歡這麼冷的天氣。
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前段有種寫詩的感覺，很不錯。若後段也寫類似的風格，會更好。
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Jac, i love ur articles so much!!!<3
You don't write a lot of words but i can feel what you feel.( thumbs up )
這種感覺，是另一種的娓娓道來。
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下雨（Traditional Chinese)
今天天氣不好，外邊多雲又下著雨。
現在雖然是秋天但是卻好感覺像冬天。
我不喜歡這麼冷的天氣。
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下雨（Traditional Chinese)
今天天氣不好。外邊多雲， 下雨了 [It's raining now. If you are trying to say, about to rain, then prepend 快要 to it]。現在是秋季天[not wrong but too many 天 in your text, makes it too long winded sounding] 但是好像冬節天。我不喜歡這麼冷的天氣。
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