没写得了清楚(I did not write clearly.)

昨天我再开始了写中文。(Yesterday I started to write Chinese again.)

有很多好人尝试了來批改。(Many lovely a good [I suppose you are not American :) ]people tried to correct it.

但是我写的了中文文字比口语差不好。(But my written Chinese is not as good as my spoken Chinese.) 差不多每个人都说的我应该也写英文。(Almost everyone said I should write English as well.) 一年多学中文有一年多了但还沒有大太多进步。(More than a year learning Chinese and my progress isn't great.)

没写清楚(I did not write clearly.)

昨天我（又）开始写中文（了）。(Yesterday I started to write Chinese again.) 很多（有爱的）人尝试了批改。(Many lovely people tried to correct it. 但是我写（的）中文没有口语好。(But my written Chinese is not as good as my spoken Chinese.) 差不多每个人（都说）我应该写好英文。(Almost everyone said I should write English as well.) 学了一年多中文的，但是进步不是很大。(More than a year learning Chinese and my progress isn't great.)

没写了清楚(I did not write clearly.)

昨天我再（又）开始了写中文。(Yesterday I started to write Chinese again.) 很多好人尝试了批改。(Many lovely people tried to correct it. 但是我写了中文（书面汉语）比口语不好。（"Written Chinese" can translate into “书面汉语”,That would be better :D )(But my written Chinese is not as good as my spoken Chinese.) 差不多每个人（都）说的我应该也写英文。(Almost everyone said I should write English as well.) 一年多学中文还太多进步。（学习中文一年多了，我的进步不是很大）(More than a year learning Chinese and my progress isn't great.)

You already did great. :D

But need to pay more attention to the word orders.

Hope you can do better next time!^^

没写了清楚(I did not write clearly.)

昨天我再又开始了写中文。(Yesterday I started to write Chinese again.) 很多好人尝试了批改。(Many lovely people tried to correct it. 但是我写了中文没有口语不好。(But my written Chinese is not as good as my spoken Chinese.) 差不多每个人说，的我应该也写好英文。(Almost everyone said I should write English as well.) 一年多学中文还太多进步。学了一年多中文的，但是进步不是很大。(More than a year learning Chinese and my progress isn't great.)

写的已经很好了