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Làm sao tôi đi trường học mổ̃i buổi sáng
Key:
[...] = new words, never used before
̣(...) = doubts about the position of the words
*...* = major doubts about the appropriate grammar --> None in this little entry
Tôi đi học đến trường như thế nào
Đầu tiên là mẹ lái ô tô đưa tôi đến bến xe búyt.
Sau đó, tôi đi xe búyt ̣đến ga [tàu điện ngầm].
Qua sáu trạm, tôi đổi tàu .
Đến trạm cuối cùng,tôi rời ga và đi bộ đến trường
English translation:
How I go to school every morning
(First of all) my mother brings me by car to the bus stop.
Then, I take the bus to the subway station.
After only six stations, I switch subway train.
(Finally) After only one station, I leave the station and go on foot to school.
Suggested correction:
- While keeping in mind that my level is beginner and that I have to use simple words, you may suggest modifications to make it sound more natural. This entry's purpose is mostly to enhance vocabulary and grammar.
- Feel free to provide additionnal prepositions to make the text more fluent.
- This text is formal, but in case informal words would fit better (let's pretend I'm talking to someone), feel free to let me know!
Related questions:
What would be the expression for "first" as in "First of all"? --> I could put it at the beginning of the text.
Also, I know it's not the most interesting text ever haha ^_^
Cảm ơn!
Làm sao tôi đi trường học mổ̃i buổi sáng
Key:
[...] = new words, never used before
̣(...) = doubts about the position of the words
*...* = major doubts about the appropriate grammar --> None in this little entry
Tôi đến trường mỗi buổi sáng như thế nào
Đầu tiên, mẹ tôi chở tôi đến bến xe buýt bằng ô tô.
Sau dó, tôi đi xe buỵ́t ̣đến ga [tàu điện ngầm].(right but Vietnam chưa có tàu điện ngầm)
Sau sáu ga, tôi chuyển sang đi tàu khác.
Cuối cùng,sau một ga nữa, tôi xuống tàu và đi bộ đến trường
English translation:
How I go to school every morning
(First of all) my mother brings me by car to the bus stop.
Then, I take the bus to the subway station.
After only six stations, I switch subway train.
(Finally) After only one station, I leave the station and go on foot to school.
Suggested correction:
- While keeping in mind that my level is beginner and that I have to use simple words, you may suggest modifications to make it sound more natural. This entry's purpose is mostly to enhance vocabulary and grammar.
- Feel free to provide additionnal prepositions to make the text more fluent.
- This text is formal, but in case informal words would fit better (let's pretend I'm talking to someone), feel free to let me know!
Related questions:
What would be the expression for "first" as in "First of all"? --> I could put it at the beginning of the text.
Also, I know it's not the most interesting text ever haha ^_^
Cảm ơn!
Tôi đến trường vào mỗi buổi sáng như thế nào?
Đầu tiên mẹ đưa tôi tới bến xe buýt. Sau dó, tôi đi xe buỵ́t ̣đến ga tàu điện ngầm.
Qua ("sau" was used twice, "qua" is replaceable in this case) sáu ga, tôi chuyển sang một tàu khác. Cuối cùng, sau một ga nữa, tôi ra khỏi ga và đi bộ đến trường học
First or first of all: Đầu tiên, Trước tiên
Finally: Cuối cùng
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