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Làm sao tôi đi trường học mổ̃i buổi sáng
Key:
[...] = new words, never used before
̣(...) = doubts about the position of the words
*...* = major doubts about the appropriate grammar --> None in this little entry
Tôi đi học đến trường như thế nào
Đầu tiên là mẹ lái ô tô đưa tôi đến bến xe búyt.
Sau đó, tôi đi xe búyt ̣đến ga [tàu điện ngầm].
Qua sáu trạm, tôi đổi tàu .
Đến trạm cuối cùng,tôi rời ga và đi bộ đến trường
English translation:
How I go to school every morning
(First of all) my mother brings me by car to the bus stop.
Then, I take the bus to the subway station.
After only six stations, I switch subway train.
(Finally) After only one station, I leave the station and go on foot to school.
Suggested correction:
- While keeping in mind that my level is beginner and that I have to use simple words, you may suggest modifications to make it sound more natural. This entry's purpose is mostly to enhance vocabulary and grammar.
- Feel free to provide additionnal prepositions to make the text more fluent.
- This text is formal, but in case informal words would fit better (let's pretend I'm talking to someone), feel free to let me know!
Related questions:
What would be the expression for "first" as in "First of all"? --> I could put it at the beginning of the text.
Also, I know it's not the most interesting text ever haha ^_^
Cảm ơn!0 votedJanuary 19, 20145- Tet holidays is coming Hello everybody, I hope you have great time with your family at weekend. Today, I will introduce something about the biggest festival in Viet Nam: TET holiday (Tết). This year, Tet holiday begins at January 29, 2014 and ends at February 05, 2014. Workers have nine day off for lunar New Year 2014. It means there are some interesting thing for foreingers to know: - On Friday, January 31, 2014, the streets in Ha Noi become quiet deserted. There are no motorbikes, no noisy. In this day, Vietnamese people don't have any business, especially we do not sweep the house or empty out rubbish (if we do that., our luck may also be swept away).It is important to keep everything ok and everybody happy in the first day of lunar Tet. If there is something bad (such as a quarrel, broken things,...), that means it will be the whole year of troubles . - When we meet together, we also give the best wishes for new year: Chúc mừng năm mới (Happy new year). Vietnamese have had the tradition of giving small children lucky money in red envelope on the first day of Lunar New Year, called "MỪNG TUỔI" - "LÌ XÌ". Adults give lucky money for children (or old people - the over 70 year people, we give lucky money to them for showing up respect) to welcome the new age on the first day of Lunar New Year. It is a small amount of money that can bring good fortune to the upcoming year. Therefore, I have some advices for some foreigners in Viet Nam. You should buy some red envelopes, and from Friday, January 31, 2014, keep smiling and say " Chúc mừng năm mới". If you meet children on these Tet holiday, you can give some lucky money in red envelopes for them. And you shouldn;'t buy something or do some business on these days. Enjoy Tet holiday by meeting Vietnamese friends and trying traditional foods. :D P/S: This lunar Year is Tết Giáp Ngọ (names after the animal designation: HORSE).
January 19, 201400 - The desire of a Vietnamese girl - ME :D Dear my language partners, At first, I want to thank laogui32 who corrected my notebook entry.. It is very helpful to me. But there is a small problem that my university is Ha Noi University of Humanities and Social Sciences, not Ho Chi Minh. And I hope everyone in this website can help me. Secondly, I want to tell you about my targets. The important aim is that I want to get IETLS certificate with score 6.5 in this year. I will learn English in 6 months and get IETLS in about September or October. My grammar is good enough but it is really difficult for me to say (or write) in English. So I decide to train everyday step by step. Why do I have to get IETLS certificate? Actually, IETLS certificate is one of the necessary conditions for me in search of SCHOLARSHIP. Getting a foreign government scholarship is my dream and hope. I have been working in a government institute for education research. That means there are many opportunities for me to get a total scholarship. There are more developed countries want to help developing countries through education aids supplies in recent years .Most government scholarships are development scholarships wherein students are expected to return back and serve their home country after completing the scholarships. And almost government of develop countries provides scholarships which target highly motivated government officials (hmmm, it is really difficult to show up what I want to say: the total government scholarship - open - prior' field : government officials, officials first and more opportunities than privacy officer - please help me building one complete sentence.) :D I end the notebook entry here. I hope that someone could correct it soon. Thanks. Have nice weekend.January 18, 201400
- Introduce myself Hello everybody. Iam from Vietnamese. I graduated at University of Human and Sciences. My major is Jourranlism and Communicatuon. At present, I has worked as an editor in science journalism for two years. I think I have enough knowledge to help someone who want to learn Vietnamese language. Especially, I can help to correct Vietnamese research reports, give usedul opinions about how to buil the structure of a report, common mistakes,, etc... My condition is you can help me improve my English. ThanksJanuary 17, 201410
