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In my secondary school days, my teacher asked us to write a composition about "the one who is the important people in your life." Of course, it was  I praised my mother. The same as I, Most students taken also wrote about their mother. as a great woman, Their mom They washed their our clothes; even in cold water during in winter with cold water, and held out an taken umbrella to them for us on a rainy days. And those rainy days were It's very frequent. But now,However, today I'd would like to introduce you to my grandpa,_an ordinary person.

Different from some students' Other grandpas father, they can play chess with their companion and walk with pride, [bride 是新娘!] with their accomplishments.  My grandpa is just a peasant. [Better still, "my grandpa comes from the peasantry.  You cannot use past tense.  It means that either he is dead or is no longer a peasant]HoweverNo matter, I'm proud of him. When I was a child, my parents worked in the another city for a living and so I lived with him grandpa. He was talkative chatty and friendly but when I am taking a mistake, he is would pointed it out immediately and taught me which what I should or should not do. Under his influence, I learnt how to be loving and to have ambition. [To have ambition and to be ambitious has slightly different meaning.  The first one is always good.  The 2nd one may not] be an ambitious people. Now I left him to am in Beijing and have not seen him for a long time. The moment Whenever I called him, tears [would] welled up in my eyes, for my memory went takes/harkens me back to the days when I happily lived with him happily.

I am missing my grandpa and I wish I can have a longer holiday so that I can help him do some farm work.

In a secondary school my teacher asked me to write an essay entitled: "Who is the most important people in your life". Of course, I chose my mother as most of the students did. As their mothers washed their clothes in cold water during the winter time and held an umbrella over them in rainy weather, their choice was very predictable. But now, I would like to focus on my grandfather - an ordinary peasant.

I am proud of him, despite of the fact that he does not play chess and does not walk with his wife as many other grandfathers do. When I was a child, my parents worked in a different city, so I lived with my grandfather. He taught me how to live and how to become an ambitious person. When I did some mistake he immediately pointed it out. He taught me what was right and what was wrong.

I have not seen him for a long time, since I moved to Beijing. The moment of leaving bore in my mind forever, as our parting was very pathetic. I have a dream to visit him during a long holiday when I can help him with his farm work and make his life a little easier.