关于英语改革的小想法

  我个人的经验，初中英语是最有用的，因为教会了我们很多口语，现在也能用。到了大学才发现，和外国人交流连基本的口语表达都不会了，而我们在英语课堂上还不断的背单词。这是一个普遍性现象，我希望学校能教会学生更多的口语表达而不是生僻的单词。

请帮我修改一下，非常感谢。 China is one of the four ancient civilizations so that there are many traditional festivals.Now let me introduce Mid-Autumn Festival to you. The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is only celebrated by Chinese people. It falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year, when people of a family get together and enjoy the dinner together. After that they eat mooncakes, which stand for the spirits of the festival-unity. Ofthen, if the weather permits, they will go out of the house to enjoy the night which have bright moonlight, talking something about gain and loss, it is one of the important festivals for the Chinese people. There is a legend about Mid-Autumn Festival.According to Chinese mythology, the earth once had 10 suns circling over it. One day, all 10 suns appeared together, scorching the earth with their heat. The earth was saved when a strong archer achieved,Hou Yi, succeeded in shooting down 9 of the suns. Yi stole the elixir of life to save the people from his tyrannical rule, but his wife, Chang-E drank it. Thus started the legend of the lady in the moon to whom young Chinese girls would pray at the Mid-Autumn Festival. People in different parts of China have different ways to celebrate the Mid-Autumn Festival. For example, in Guangzhou in South China, the huge lantern show is a big attraction for local citizens. Thousands of differently shaped lanterns are lit, forming a fantastic contrast with the bright moonlight.

请帮我修改，谢谢。 In my secondary school, my teacher asked us wrote a composition about"who is the important people in your life." Of course I praised my mother. The same as I, most students taken their mother as a great woman, Their mom washed their clothes in winter with cold water, taken umbrella to them on a rainy day. It's very frequent. But now,I'd like to introduce you to my grandpa,an ordinary person. Different from some students' grandfather, they can play chess with their companion and walk with bride, my grandpa just a peasant. However, I'm proud of him. When I was a child, my parents worked in the other city for a living so I lived with grandpa. He was talkative but when I am taking a mistake, he is pointed it out immediately and taught me which should or should not do. Under his influence, I learned how to love and to be an ambitious people. Now I left him to Beijing and havn't seen him for a long time. The moment I called him tears welled up in my eyes, for my memory went back to the day when I lived with him happily. I am missing my grandpa and I wish I have a longer holiday so that I can help him do some farm work.

Commercialism of Vatentine's Day is Necessary Valentine's Day is a traditional festival in China and most western countries. People will celebrate the day with his or her lover. So it causes kinds of commercial-isms. In China, Valentine's Day is at July 7th. In this day, lots of grocery and flower store will sell roses and chocolates, you can see many girls walking down the street with a bunch of rose or taking a box of chocolate. In addition, you can witness lots of people streaming into the restaurant and park to spending the day which full of love and romantic. In short, Valentine's Day commercialism is a way to contributing to the economy. People buy the gift for each other can increase income for seller so that they have enough money to paying for revenue, at last the country have enough money to develop. Therefore, it's a virtuous circle. Besides, at commercialism time, people buy the gift as a lower price not only save money but also maintain a good emotion with lovers, because they don't need to worry about that gift is too expensive to pay for it. However, commercialism of Valentine's Day may cause blindness consumption, but compare with advantage, it's too unimportance to value. So in my eyes, commercialism of Valentine's Day is necessary.

A Summary It's a story about a father and son. Most undergraduate are busy to studying hard and become anxious in the fall of their final year, because they do not know what to do when they graduate. A student of the peer group knows what himself want to do clearly: he intends to travel and to be a writer. Nonetheless, he thinks his family probably criticize him and his assumes his father wants him to be a lawyer so he didn't express his really thought. Until one day his father takes him to catching crabs. From crabs' behaviours, the father told the boy a life principle: do what you want to do and do not get pulled back by the others. The son tells his really dream to his father and got affirmed. The ending of the story, the father and son set off back home with crabs.

shopping in stores and shopping online With the development of the economy, we can shop in different ways, such as shop in stores, shop online and shop on TV. The first and the second way are very common, so we can make a comparison. Shopping in the stores is very traditional, a plenty of people choose to shopping in store. Not only because it's very convenience, but also we can see and touch the goods intuitive. Besides, in the store, the goods is safe and trustworthy. We can shopping with friends on the weekend, it's a fun thing! On the other hand, with the development of the Internet, more and more people shopping online, it's more convenience than shopping in stores. Just click your mouse to choose the articles you like, and the purchase is done. You don't even have to step out of the room, it's easy and quick. But every coin has two sides. In consumers' eyes, shopping in stores means lots of time wasting, and they also run the risk of out of money. On the contrary, shopping online is time and money saving, they can buy whatever they like and no need to worry about the money lost or stolen. But we must always bear in mind that certain traps do exist, Internet fraud is everywhere. So we'd better make sure the sellers are trustworthy before buying. In addition, we should guard ourselves from the potential hackers who might steal our account information. In my opinion, shopping in stores and shopping online each has its own advantages, but I believe that a majority of people choose to shop online in the future. We can also comb in with the two ways and make full use of them. But the most important is, we should protect our private information.

可以这样翻译吗 Facing the Sea With Spring Blossoms—HaiZi 面朝大海，春暖花开—海子 From tomorrow on,I will be a happy man. 从明天起，做一个幸福的人 Grooming,chopping and traveling all over the world. 喂马，劈柴，周游世界 From tomorrow on,I will care foodstuff and vegetable. 从明天起，关心粮食和蔬菜 Living in a house towards the sea, with spring blossoms. 我有一所房子，面朝大海，春暖花开 From tomorrow on,write to each of my dear ones. 从明天起，和每一个人通信 Telling them of my happiness. 告诉他们我的幸福 What the lightening of happiness has told me. 那幸福的闪电告诉我的 I will spread it to each of them. 我将告诉每一个人 Give a warm name for every river and every mountain. 给每一条河每一座山取一个温暖的名字 Strangers,I will also wish you happy. 陌生人，我也为你祝福 May you have a brilliant future! 愿你有一个灿烂的前程 May you lovers eventually become spouses! 愿有情人终成眷属 May you enjoy happiness in this earthly world! 愿你们在尘世获得幸福 I only wish to face the sea, with spring blossoms. 我只愿面朝大海，春暖花开 -

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