First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello everyone,my name is Doris.My hometown is Xuzhou, a famous ancient city in Jiangsu province.Now, I am pursuing my postgraduate study in Jilin University.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello everyone,my name is Doris.My hometown is Xuzhou, a famous ancient city in Jiangsu province.Now, I am pursuing my postgraduate study in Jilin University. I am very glad to meet you here. From my perspective,English is so significant to our daliy life and study that almost young people are crazy about it. That is why I choose English as my second language.

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Nice picture. Do you play the violin?

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello everyone,my name is Doris.My hometown is Xuzhou, a famous ancient city in Jiangsu province.Now, I am pursuing my postgraduate study in Jilin University. I am very glad to meet you here. From my perspective,English is so significant to our daliy life and study that almost young people are crazy about it. That is why I choose English as my second language.

Your English here is nearly perfect. The only problem is "almost". You must have meant "almost all" or just "most".

Great job!

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