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    木星的卫星

    昨晚我用我的望远镜看到木星。看到三颗木星的卫星。天文真美。

    昨晚我用望远镜看到了木星,与此同时,我还看到了三颗围绕木星的卫星。天空真的好美。

    1、“我的”去掉,因为重复

    2、“与此同时”=at the same time 

    3、“围绕”=around  adj.          使句子更形象

    4、“好”=very 感叹词

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    First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello everyone,my name is Doris.My hometown is Xuzhou, a famous ancient city in Jiangsu province.Now, I am pursuing my postgraduate study in Jilin University. I am very glad to meet you here. From my perspective,English is so significant to our daliy life and study that almost young people are crazy about it. That is why I choose English as my second language.
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