My Grandmother
Today is busy. I just came back home. However, nothing can be compared with that I came to see my grandmother this afternoon. Although where she lives is not far from me, I just have no consciousness to see her. The only thing I do for her is buying something and then let my mum bring to her. To be honest, I am not familiar with her. At least, before my 18 years old, my memory doesn't have her. I never lived with my grandmother and I haven't see her often since my parents picked grandparents to the city where I live recent years. This afternoon, my parents bring me to see grandmother. She became too old and wrinkled. The hair is almost white and she seemed shorter. I held her hand talk with her, I cannot use words to describe the feeling when I touched her skin, I knew my tears nearly came, but I fought them down. My grandmother cannot understand mandarin, so I try to use the dialect she speaking. I said" grandmother, you looks so beautiful today." Although my dialect is not standard, my grandmother seemed understand my words and laughed like a child. I enjoyed talking with her. But time flies, I need to leave. At last I huged my grandmother with my deepest love.
I regret do not see her often. Although we almost haven't the same memory, we takled less, she is my grandmother, nothing can impede the natural affection . I will cherish the time with my grandmother and see her often from now.
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My Grandmother
Today is a busy day for me. I just came back home. However, nothing can be compared with that I came to the thrill that I am going to see my grandmother this afternoon. Although where she lives is not far from me, I just have no consciousness been lazy to see visit her. All I did was to buy her something and let mother bring it to her. The only thing I do for her is buying something and then let my mum bring to her. To be honest, I am not familiar with her do not know her well, that is not before I turned 18. At least, before my 18 years old, my memory doesn't have I have no recollection of her then. I never lived with my grandmother her and I haven't see her often since my parents picked grandparents until recently when my parents brought my grandparents to live in the same to the city where I am. live recent years. This afternoon, my parents bring are bringing me to see grandmother. She had became too become old and wrinkled. The Her hair is almost white and she seemed shorter. I held her hand talk as I chatted with her. I cannot use find words to describe the feeling when I touched her skin. I knew my tears nearly teared came, but I fought them down held back. My grandmother cannot does not understand Mandarin and so I try tried to converse with her to use the in our dialect she speaking. I said,
"grandmother Grandmama, you looks so beautiful today."
Although my dialect is not standard good, my grandmother seemed to understand my words and laughed giggled like a little girl child. I enjoyed talking with her. But time flies, I need have to leave. At last I hugged my grandmother with my deepest love.
I regret that I do not see her often. Although We don't share common interests and so we do not talk often. almost haven't the same memory, we takled less, Still she is my grandmother, and nothing can impede the break this natural bond between usaffection . I will cherish the time with my grandmother and see her often from now onwards.
Good piece again! Now you make me quite curious... What dialect do your ancestors speak? It is really a shame that dialects are dying... Along with it, its wonderul and richness of the culture. It would be like English replacing Chinese etc.
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To sipatai, thank you for your blessing. Hope you too:) Life is too short, we need to cherish the time with the ones we loved. I am not that good as you said, I am too easy to angry with my parents, I just cannot control myself. Everytime, I will regret what I do. But I am trying to change, I want to cherish everyone I love, reducing the regret until I die. Thank you sipatai!
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In almost all of your note, I can see honesty and pureness inside it, even it write in a broken English, it have power. And something that goes from the heart, end up in heart. And this note, really touch me, it remind me of my own grandma from the line of my mother who already pass away. I hope you the best Yunyi :)
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