My daily routine

Hello, can you correct my notebook entry? Thanks!

Every morning I wake up around 7, and I start my day with a fast quick shower. After that, I have breakfast. Usually I eat a yogurt and I have a coffee.* Then I dress up get dressed, I brush my teeth, and I brush my hair. **Then I'm ready to go to the college. I take my  ^the bus and then I have a short walk to my department. Very often I have class both in the morning and in the afternoon, so I have lunch at a bar near my dept, with my friends. Otherwise, if I have lessons only in the morning, I come back home for lunch. When I have not class^^, I study or I spend time in my hobbies (I love reading, running, watching TV series, going to the theater). At the end of the day, after dinner, I usually I watch a movie with my family and then I go to bed.

*This is correct grammatically. However, you could also say. Usually I have a yogurt and coffee.

**You have started the sentence in the first person, so it is not necessary to continue to use the pronoun I in your list. That is implied. "Then I get dressed, brush my teeth, and brush my hair."

^The use of my implies possession. The sentence makes sense but sounds like you own the bus. Using 'the' makes more sense for the sentence...unless you do own the bus. : ) 

^^There are a couple ways to say this sentence. You can say:

            1. When I don't have class,

            2. When I have no classes,

I would usually use the first option rather than the second. The second is more formal.

Great Job! It's a great entry. : )

My daily routine

Hello, can you correct my notebook entry? Thanks!

Every morning I wake up around 7, and start my day with a fast shower. After that, I have breakfast. I usually eat a yogurt and have a coffee. Then I dress up, brush my teeth, and brush my hair. Then I'm ready to go to the college: I take my bus and then have a short walk to my dept. Very often I have class both in the morning and in the afternoon, so I have lunch at a bar near my dept, with my friends. Otherwise, if I only have a lesson in the morning, I return home for lunch. When I do not have class, I study or spend time with my hobbies (I love reading, running, watch tv series, going to theater). At the end of the day, after dinner, I usually watch a movie with my family and the I go to bed.

I made some above corrections but overall this is good and understandable. You use "I" a little too much and I've omitted it although, maybe not wrong per say, it is more readable this way. Hope, that helps!

My daily routine

Hello, can you correct my notebook entry? Thanks!

Every morning I wake up around 7, and I start my day with a fast shower. After that, I have breakfast, usually I eat a yogurt and I have a coffee. Then I dress up, I brush my theet, and I brush my hair. Then I'm ready to go to the college: I take my bus and then I have a short walk to my dept. Very often I have class both in the morning and in the afternoon, so I have lunch at a bar near my dept, with my friends. Otherwise, if I have lesson only in the morning, I come back home for lunch. When I have not class, I study or I spend time in my hobbies (I love reading, running, watch tv series, go to theatre). At the end of the day, after dinner, I usually I watch a movie with my family and the I go to bed.

Every morning I wake up around 7 and start my day with a quick shower. After that, I have breakfast. I usually eat a yogurt and have coffee.Then, I get dressed, brush my teeth and brush my hair. After getting ready, I go to school on the bus and have a short walk to my department. I often have classes in the morning and in the afternoon, so I have lunch at a bar near my department with my friends. On days that I only have a lesson in the morning, I go back home for lunch. When I do not have class, I study or spend time doing my hobbies. I love reading, running, watching TV series and going to the theater. At the end of the day, after dinner, I usually watch a movie with my family and then I go to bed.